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[FIC] That Was The Deal (oneshot)

Jan 30, 2009 10:55

Title: That Was The Deal
Author: jung_hyeri
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst (WARNING: character death!)
Summary: Donghae ends up in the wrong place at the wrong time....

A/N: Inspired by remembering something my cousin witnessed years ago....with a bit of a twist. AND I FINALLY GOT TO WRITE SOMETHING WITH YESUNG AS A MAJOR CHARACTER. Yaaaaaaaay. *coughs*

( Karma's a bitch...and then you die. )

character: junsu, *fanfiction, character: eunhyuk, character: yesung, character: han geng, character: donghae, character: ryeowook

Comments 36

korichan January 30 2009, 11:08:09 UTC

I'm telling you, poetic justice = WIN. I think Carey will definitely forgive you, they got their comeuppance in the end!

I told you I was waiting for it~ Haha, and I just your IM saying it was up. :P

I really liked the idea of it though, getting close to him in order to kill him. Ryeo sounds jealous as much as he does tired of waiting, and I told you before I am fine in the belief that Yehsung probably got close to Hyuk the same way he did Hae. After all....he was going to introduce Hae to his boyfriend, right??

<333

svtstarlight January 30 2009, 11:13:09 UTC

You stalker you. *giggles*

I hope she forgives me for killing her hubby. *sheepish* I think she was a bit peeved at me last night, from the text I got. *hides behind you*

I like the twist I thought of - poetic justice indeed. Hehehe Evil!Yesung FTW. (and yeah, I think Ryeo was a bit jealous...hehehe)

korichan January 30 2009, 11:26:14 UTC

I couldn't help it, and this is why she needs to be here, because I encourage bad things!!!

You can hide behind me! I take full responsibility for the deaths!!

XDD We always think alike, it's because I'm your lil' doppleganger!

svtstarlight January 30 2009, 11:34:54 UTC

<333333333333333 I love being encouraged tho. *grins* (weird, I know...hehehehehe This is what too little sleep for too long does to me...)

I'm glad you liked it in the end tho. Even tho I killed off YOUR favourite too. <3

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nya16 January 30 2009, 13:11:42 UTC

I'VE ALWAYS KNOWN YESUNG IS SECRETLY EVIL.
But noes, Donghae. ;O;

Man, I missed reading your fics.

Been so busy lately that I haven't been much of a friend, I know. And I'm really really sorry. :(

svtstarlight January 30 2009, 16:25:01 UTC

He so is. And I love it. <3333

*hugs* It's ok. I know you've had exams and stuff going on so don't worry. I'm on hiatus from my personal journal a little longer than expected because I can't actually GET to it. (the desktop is gone now but I can't actually access my FF profile which has all my passwords on it *dies of embarrassment* and because my pwd file is not up to date...I'm stuck until hubby gets back from London to help with it.)

I hope you feel better soon, and don't worry. You know where I am if you need me. <3

nya16 January 30 2009, 17:41:22 UTC

Me too! <333

*hugs back* Thanks for understanding, you're too great. <3 (That sucks. D: I hate losing passwords, I hope everything will work out soon~)

I really could use a good talk, but I'm so sick of thinking of all the shit I'm going through. Thanks so much! <3333333

followurdestiny January 30 2009, 14:25:46 UTC

spot *will be back*

followurdestiny February 5 2009, 23:48:47 UTC

ok back, almost forgot to read this one >_< ...ugh so many deaths... what are the deals about, justice and killing all witnesses, of what? Mhmm.. very good story though <3

svtstarlight February 5 2009, 23:58:23 UTC

I'm still thinking up the details for the prequel but there will be one. Don't worry. :) Then hopefully all the questions will be answered. <3 Thanks for reading it, even if later than you'd planned. *grins and pats*

volatileflame January 30 2009, 15:02:35 UTC

O_O . . . wow

svtstarlight January 30 2009, 16:26:00 UTC

Is that a good thing or a bad thing? *worries* (at least I didn't break your heart this time? *hopeful*)

Tho Carey is going to shoot me when she gets back. Or so her text message said. *sheepish smile*

volatileflame January 30 2009, 16:44:22 UTC

it was good.

so much left open though. i assume there's a backstory somewhere?

svtstarlight January 30 2009, 17:00:52 UTC

Erm....well there could be? If you want it. (I'll have to make it up...*chuckles*)

I'm glad you liked it tho. ^//^

I was basically going off an experience my cousin had when we were younger (we're both from the same city, only she grew up in a rougher area of town than I did...) that I only just remembered while talking to Jenna last night....and thought it would make a good story. (tho the person in question didn't die, nor did my cousin as the witness LOL)

*is thinking of backstory for you for this* \(^.^)/

Thread 5

WHAT WHAT WHAT?!?! runawayxxlovee January 30 2009, 16:04:28 UTC

...OHMYEFFINGAWD, YOU KILLED EUNHYUK DDDDDDDDX NO NO NO NO NO NO NO DDDDDD: And in the first scene too.

*points dramatically at my icon* HOW CAN YOUUUUU~~~~~?!?

;_;

Evil Yesung pwns majorly in this fic. So dark and twisted, the deal at the end. It makes me wonder what they were all involved in. Gawd, near the end line with... {Hankyung choked back a sob and picked up the young man's body, laying him gently on the bed and arranging him carefully, pulling the blanket over Donghae and tucking it in neatly as if he were putting him to sleep.} It breaks my heart even more. :/

YOU KILLED KILLED HIM DD:

amazing as always♥

Re: WHAT WHAT WHAT?!?! svtstarlight January 30 2009, 16:28:38 UTC

*laughs* This was pretty much the gist of Carey's text message after Haechan told her what I was going to do. <33333333333 That, and I'm going to be shot on Tuesday when she gets back. *hides behind korichan*

*hugs* I'm sorry? I...well, it was either him or Hankyung or Yunho...and we figured it would just make more sense being Hyukkie. *apologetic*