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svgurl

The Final Chapter

Jun 03, 2007 12:49

This is the final chapter of my story! Thank you to all my loyal readers, who have been so nicely reviewing on every chapter. Your encouraging words always made my day!I hope you like the last chapter.

But first I must give a shoutout to a very cool person:boltgirl426. I was having a lot of trouble ending this story and she wrote the second half of my ending ( Read more... )

category: slash, collie, fanfic, fandom: smallville, ship: clark/oliver, story: chemicals react

Comments 6

queenjazzy June 3 2007, 21:38:49 UTC

This fic was amazing from start to finish. I have so much love for this chapter, really I do. It's the perfect ending to the fic.

--Jazzy--

svgurl June 3 2007, 22:32:23 UTC

thank you! i'm awed by the response i got to this story. :D i'm glad you liked it. i had such a problem with the ending . . . i never know how to close a story. so i'm really happy i had boltgirl426 to write it for me. ;)

i appreciate you reviewing so consistenly too. your nice words always made my day. :)

quiet__tiger March 8 2008, 14:25:01 UTC

You know, I'd feel bad for Clark's heart breaking and everything if it weren't all his fault! He ran away and he lied and he made a big friggin' mess of things. That's about par for the course for him.

I did feel really bad for Oliver. The wedding, Clark running away, seeing him with Lois... awful.

And Jor-El! He is such an asshole! I mean, and it's canonical he's an ass! He locked Clark in a block of ice for weeks and we still don't know why! Argh.

Chloe needs to find some less stressful friends.

Anyway, nice story!

svgurl March 8 2008, 22:42:23 UTC

Yeah, Clark was kind of a jerk in this one. And Ollie was completely angsted. I really tortured him a lot.

Jor-El is an asshole ... I completely agree. I mean, we've seen what he's done on the show. I STILL don't understand why he locked him in that block of ice. Some twisted time out? Clark's 20, not 2. It's no wonder Clark doesn't trust him. :\

LOL! Chloe does need to find better friends. Oh well.

I'm glad you liked the story! It was my first WIP that I actually completed and it's still one of my personal favorites so it means a lot that you read it.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

moniklaa September 3 2011, 21:28:16 UTC

Excellent fic!
I loved it, Clark made a mess with Lois but ... that was the best of all.

svgurl September 3 2011, 22:31:52 UTC

I'm glad that you enjoyed it! And yes, Clark did screw up with Lois but she forgave him. I do love Clois ...I just love Collie more. :D

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment! :)