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Accidentally in Love Chapter 14

Nov 13, 2007 11:04

An update is here. Thanks to everyone who keeps supporting me on this fic. I really appreciate the feedback. And I hope you like the new chapter too. Let me know! :)

Story: Accidentally in Love
Pairing/Characters: Clark/Oliver, Chloe/Jimmy, Lois/Oliver, mentions of past Lexana & Clana
Rating: R
Disclaimer: don’t own anything
Warning: slash, m/m sex
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category: slash, collie, story: accidentally in love, fanfic, fandom: smallville, ship: clark/oliver

Comments 13

chaotic4life November 13 2007, 21:03:38 UTC

Heartmeltage ... that was adorable.
Although I have to say I am a little thrown with the ring ... could Ollie be any more obvious *g* ... Clark's idea for the dinner at the castle was beautiful.

Can't wait to read more. Thanks for the chapter.

svgurl November 13 2007, 21:06:48 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it. Yes, Ollie's SO in love. LOL

But I thought it would be a good idea with the dinner, it just struck me one day and I couldn't get it out of my head. So I decided to go with it and I'm so glad it worked for you.

thank YOU for taking the time to read & review. Loyal readers like you keep me inspired to continue writing. :)

carolandtom November 13 2007, 23:46:42 UTC

This was a sweet chapter! I loved Oliver and Chloe's concern for Clark. And their Valentine's Day couldn't have been better. Great job!

svgurl November 13 2007, 23:49:34 UTC

i'm so glad you enjoyed it! :) I love both Oliver and Chloe. As for Oliver, the near death experience showed Ollie how easily he could lose Clark. :D

I was worried this chapter would be too sappy but I'm so relieved it worked for you!

Thanks for taking the time to read & review! I really appreciate the feedback.

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svgurl November 14 2007, 04:00:14 UTC

"Honestly, who are Ollie and Clark trying to fool? If they're just friends with benefits then the Grand Canyon is just a hole in the ground."

Well, they're doing an excellent job of fooling themselves. ;) And each other too. But really, that's it. :D

thanks for taking the time to read & review!

souless_misses November 14 2007, 07:06:03 UTC

*gushes* that was too sweet, ahh loved the whole castle scene and the whole idea of them getting eachother gifts, and such meaningful gifts, lovely just lovely, now if only one of them would make the first move...~^.^~

Now this is the kind of writings that makes me soar with happiness Collie is such LOVE.
Awesome work, see you on the next chapter.

svgurl November 14 2007, 07:10:40 UTC

I'm beyond thrilled you liked the chapter so much. I thought it would be nice to have Clark take Ollie to the fortress. With Lana, he felt pressured but I thought this would be nice. And I'm so glad you liked the gifts too.

Trust me, moves will be made soon enough. I like this story because it's so much fun to write. It's weird, balancing this one, which is all happy (for the most part) and "Sober", which is filled with angst. But I'm glad the story is working for you.

I'm working on the next chapter so I'll try to have it out soon enough. Thanks for taking the time to read & review and sticking with me on yet another one of my fics! I really appreciate your support.

babydracky November 15 2007, 20:27:30 UTC

A very nice chapter about the Valentine Day ÖÖ
I'm so happy they spent it together and especially because now they had to understand that there trully are fellings ÖÖ

svgurl November 15 2007, 20:30:17 UTC

I thought it would be nice to have a chapter on Valentine's Day. :D I had fun writing it so I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it.

Yup, they can't be in denial much longer. And Ollie is so obvious with his ring. ;)

Thanks so much for taking the time to read & review! I really appreciate the feedback.