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Prompt #33 "Too Much"

Nov 10, 2007 19:45

Another prompt from my table. I hope you all like it. Let me know!! :)

Title: Come Undone
Pairing/Characters: Clark Kent/Oliver Queen
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: don't own anything
Warnings: slash (pre-slash anyway)
Spoilers: 7.07 “Wrath”
Summary: The world is closing in on Clark and that’s when Oliver Queen makes a reappearance in his life.

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category: slash, collie, challenge: fanfic100, fanfic, fandom: smallville, ship: clark/oliver

Comments 18

babydracky November 11 2007, 11:31:40 UTC

I have to say that I REALLY like that story. I think it's the better text I read about Clark and Ollie's friendship. It is really beautiful.
And I'm just happy that Clark has a so good friend he can trust. It is so important. And really, even if I don't know very much about Smallville show... Oliver seems to be so different from the other characters Clark has around him.
Well, that is always nice to know that we are not alone and that we have trusted friends.

svgurl November 11 2007, 19:30:28 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.

Clark really needs someone to open up with. Chloe is great but she has her own problems right now. Oliver is different. He always tells it like it is and he's good for Clark. :)

It is nice. Friends are great and I think Clark needs them too. Hopefully we'll get some nice Collie interaction when Oliver returns in January.

thanks for taking the time to read & review!

babydracky November 11 2007, 21:37:39 UTC

I can't wait to watch the episode in january with Oliver's come back^^

svgurl November 11 2007, 21:44:23 UTC

me too!! yay for oliver!

firestarhiei November 11 2007, 21:07:34 UTC

I really enjoyed this fic. It made me happy to hear some one tell Clark that he is not to blame for other's decisions and immoral behavior. Ollie voiced everything I ever wanted Clark to hear or say himself. I just want Clark to say to Lana and Lex "take responsibility for your own mistakes don't try to land the blame on me". I hate how Lana and Lex would complain about Clark having secrets. They were his secrets and he has a personal right to keep them. No one has the right to push him into giving up his right to privacy.

svgurl November 11 2007, 21:23:41 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! The idea just struck me after watching "Wrath" and I just had to run with it.

I was really sickened by Lex blaming Clark for what happened to Lana and hinting that Clark was to blame for him too. i mean, they both take advantage of Clark's good nature and it was just stupid. I too want to hear Clark say that! :) That'd be awesome.

And I soo agree on the secrets. It's Clark's secrets and he's not under any obligation to tell anyone anything. :D

Thanks for taking the time to read & review! I really appreciate the feedback.

tmelange November 18 2007, 01:52:17 UTC

I really liked the way this fic progressed. I was also impressed with the UST that you built up, and that you didn't rush anything too physical between them. Bravo. This is one of those short stories that deserves a continuation... ;)

svgurl November 18 2007, 06:02:39 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I tried to make subtle hints on their feelings but I didn't want to make anything explicit just yet. And I'm thrilled it worked for you.

This will definitely have a continuation. You've read the sequel and there will be more, trust me. :D

Thanks so much for taking the time to read & review!