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Accidentally in Love Chapter 3

Aug 29, 2007 20:23

New chapter up! I hope you're all enjoying the story so far! Please read and review! :)

Story: Accidentally in Love
Pairing/Characters: Collie, Chloe/Jimmy, Lollie mentions of past Lexana & Clana
Rating: R
Disclaimer: don’t own anything
Warning: slash, mentions of m/m sex
Spoilers: season 7
Summary: Oliver returns to Metropolis on business. Clark’s ( Read more... )

category: slash, collie, story: accidentally in love, fanfic, fandom: smallville, ship: clark/oliver

Comments 6

queenjazzy August 30 2007, 04:07:14 UTC

Man, I've been a busy little bee these past couple of days that I hadn't had a chance to read this fic yet, but I got some time to do so today.

First let me say, the characterization is amazing and I'm already in love with this fic after only three chapters. It's very well written and I'm looking forward to see the story unfold. I loved Clark and Ollie's talk in the previous chapter. It was amazing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

svgurl August 30 2007, 04:22:53 UTC

well i'm glad you got a chance to catch up on the story then! :D i'm really thrilled that you are enjoying it so far. this was the plot that won in my poll and i was hoping i would do it justice. :)

next one should be up in a couple of days! thanks so much for reviewing!

mitsuki_shizuka August 30 2007, 17:19:02 UTC

This chapter is just amazing, the way you switch between the different characters' point of view is well done and each of their personality is well written as well! I just love it and can't wait for the next chapter :D

svgurl August 30 2007, 17:45:48 UTC

thanks so much! i was worried about the transitions but i'm really happy you think it worked. sometimes i am not sure if i capture the characters right so i'm relieved you liked the chapter. it was hard for me to write because i hate making ollie sad. it had to be done though. :)

next one should be up within a couple of days!

babydracky September 1 2007, 23:54:29 UTC

WOW
That chapter is really GREAT!!!
I'm just happy you made Oliver and Lois met again! And really Lois is so courageous and strong to be able to push away Ollie OO
Poor Oliver! He'll so need confort! ÖÖ

svgurl September 1 2007, 23:57:20 UTC

thanks so much! i know it was a sad chapter; it was hard for me to write because i hate to make ollie sad. but we both know lois isn't the cheating type. but she is very strong to reject oliver. i don't think i would've been able to do that. LOL! :D

Yes, ollie is sad. clark to rescue! well, maybe. ;) you'll have to read the next chapter to find out!