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hmsharmony in svevenstar_arts

Fic: Three drabbles (Arthur/Gwen)

Aug 07, 2011 19:41

All three of these were written for ag_fics's Mini Challenge 3. =)

Title: No Matter of Chance
Fandom: Merlin
Characters/Pairings: Arthur, Merlin, Arthur/Gwen
Rating: PG
Genre: Humor/Fluff
Prompt: Merlin: How was the date?
Arthur: Rubbish
Merlin: I knew it would be a waste of time
Arthur: Not exactly
A/N: This is a slightly longer version of my original ( Read more... )

fic: merlin, length: drabble, pairing (fic): arthur/gwen

Comments 36

mystizan August 8 2011, 03:09:44 UTC

I LOVE the first one especially. Stalker!

hmsharmony August 8 2011, 03:11:37 UTC

Hee, thanks, bb!!

robinmarian August 8 2011, 11:23:18 UTC

OMG!!! JEN!! WHY AREN'T YOU WRITING LONGER A/G FICS?? WAAAAAAAHHHH

BB THESE DRABBLES ARE ALL AWESOME. AM PRETTY SURE I VOTED FOR THEM! THE SECOND ONE IS MY FAVE. OMG I LOVE ME SOME BABY FICS. BB, YOU HAVE GOT TO CONTINUE THIS ONE. I FLOVE THIS LINE “That’s it. We’re moving to a nudist colony.”

First one was so cute!! Arthur going to where Gwen works for his date.

Last one was so angsty. <333

hmsharmony August 8 2011, 23:28:41 UTC

Aw, thanks, J! And I've actually written a 10,000+ word one, as mentioned above, but it's a bit of a mess due to being filled with one cliche after the next. Trying to salvage it rn. XD

Heee, did you really? Thank you! <3 <3

I think I love angst almost as much as you love baby fic. =P

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hmsharmony August 8 2011, 23:29:37 UTC

Thank you! ♥ I definitely had the most fun writing that first one. =D

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hmsharmony August 8 2011, 23:30:59 UTC

Aw, thank you for such kind and in-depth comments! I can't make any promises, especially knowing how rarely I write fic, but I would love to expand the first one.

Thank you again!!

starry_laa August 8 2011, 17:31:58 UTC

Bb, I didn't know you were writing drabbles for a challenge D:

Anyway, anyway, LOVELY. I loved the first one! How 'subtle' for Arthur to have 'ASK OUT GWEN' in his BB. Bless him, he wouldn't know what discreet was if it hit him with a truck! Loved the modern setting.

The second one was really sweet. I lopved the glimpse of them parenting. And lol, a nudist colony, eh?

The third one was deliciously angsty, with undertones of Snow Patrol ^ ^.
This line was lovely They yearn for the Camelot that graces their dreams, the one they spend hours planning in the quiet of his chambers. But when all else is gone, what’s to stop the lightening from striking them? And it's heartbreaking that they're so far from that.

Great job, Jen! So glad to see you writing. ♥ ♥

hmsharmony August 8 2011, 23:37:18 UTC

I'm sorry! D= I didn't realize it was a big deal. Although I suppose this can be payback for you not telling me you had posted the final chapter of your fic. =P (JK I LOVE YOU.)

ACTUALLY, in my head Arthur nagged Morgana about Gwen's work schedule until she told him just to get rid of him, and he plugged the info into his BB. Which, now that I think about it, is incredibly sketchy. Although I think it's pretty much accepted by our side of the fandom that Arthur can be unintentionally sketchy in that dorky way of his. But yes, discreet certainly isn't his middle name.

Um, that second one was completely random. Verging on crack. I'm not sure what I was thinking. I still can't believe it won for best laugh because it was just so ridiculous. XD ( ... )