Wow! I am in awe. You fit in an incredible amount of prompts, and did it so seemlessly, too.
I loved how you kept comeing back to Clark being exceptional and the pie, and how you tied it in with one of your other fics for this challenge.
This was a great way to describe Clark: "That in an area of apples and oranges, you're a more exotic type of fruit." Hee! Wonderful.
I really enjoyed the whole story, and I'm impressed with your ability to have each chapter be exactly 100 words. I know what a challenge that is. Well done.
I was partly inspired by you and your 14 drabbles.
This is my second attempt at a 'longer' series. The other one is being picked apart and broken down into salvageable individuals, because it just didn't work.
I'm glad you liked it. It worked a lot better than I had hoped.
Very nice! I loved the openening line and then how you used the rest of the connected drabbles to show what that line really signified. How adorable that Clark wants more and Lex is heroically restraining himself. As you put it so memorably though, "Lex is sure he was more moveable than Clark is stoppable." Yay for Clark getting his way!
I love your exposition here. I love dissecting Lex's brain, his motivations and intentions; so this rang my bell.
People who inspire doubt in Lex do not stay long in his orbit, but Clark... Clark is the exception to every rule Lex creates.
And this:
"Of course, Clark. Anything you want."
Oh the Freudian slip :)
I also love that you commit and make Clark's eyes green. There seems to be so much disagreement about that in fanon but I love someone who takes a firm stand (and whose opinion agrees with mine, LOL)
Clark's willingness to speak candidly increased with Lex's proximity.
Ooooooooooh what a delightful idea. How close would they have to get, I wonder, to make everything all right between them? Mmmm.
Here's something else that tickles me: Lex destroying Lionel's business just to make himself feel better. Lovely Lex. So deliciously evil.
Lex is sure he is more moveable than Clark is stoppable.
And so deliciously stubborn. Except in the face of one force. Yes.
I hear you. It may sound weird but I feel like I'm in a total fic desert right now; I would kill for a good idea but I got nothing. Hence, tons of drabbles based on crap someone else gave me. They're like procrastination to me.
My desert is a bare island, surrounded by salty ocean water (epic AU fics), with the very occasional drizzle of rain (drabbles) to be hoarded.
You should keep an eye on the Clexmas community (there's a gift exchange coming up?) and CLFF, which is on round 34 until the end of November.
They are, again, prompts given from other people, but I really like the story I came up with for CLFF (1200 words) and my Clexmas has been a fun and educational experience (at 12000+ words.)
Also, if you're really desperate, I have plot bunnies to spare. >D
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I loved how you kept comeing back to Clark being exceptional and the pie, and how you tied it in with one of your other fics for this challenge.
This was a great way to describe Clark: "That in an area of apples and oranges, you're a more exotic type of fruit." Hee! Wonderful.
I really enjoyed the whole story, and I'm impressed with your ability to have each chapter be exactly 100 words. I know what a challenge that is. Well done.
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This is my second attempt at a 'longer' series. The other one is being picked apart and broken down into salvageable individuals, because it just didn't work.
I'm glad you liked it. It worked a lot better than I had hoped.
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People who inspire doubt in Lex do not stay long in his orbit, but Clark... Clark is the exception to every rule Lex creates.
And this:
"Of course, Clark. Anything you want."
Oh the Freudian slip :)
I also love that you commit and make Clark's eyes green. There seems to be so much disagreement about that in fanon but I love someone who takes a firm stand (and whose opinion agrees with mine, LOL)
Clark's willingness to speak candidly increased with Lex's proximity.
Ooooooooooh what a delightful idea. How close would they have to get, I wonder, to make everything all right between them? Mmmm.
Here's something else that tickles me: Lex destroying Lionel's business just to make himself feel better. Lovely Lex. So deliciously evil.
Lex is sure he is more moveable than Clark is stoppable.
And so deliciously stubborn. Except in the face of one force. Yes.
Lex's dragons are in technicolor.
Such poetry!
" ( ... )
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I'm working on singular drabbles again. With a drabble pair here and there, because I apparently can't resist.
I tried to write a few gen or het drabbles and ended up with mpreg, so I'm really not entirely certain whose driving my brain bus of late.
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You should keep an eye on the Clexmas community (there's a gift exchange coming up?) and CLFF, which is on round 34 until the end of November.
They are, again, prompts given from other people, but I really like the story I came up with for CLFF (1200 words) and my Clexmas has been a fun and educational experience (at 12000+ words.)
Also, if you're really desperate, I have plot bunnies to spare. >D
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