And So It Began.... Part Ten (Kyle and Oliver, R)

Nov 08, 2009 07:16

Fandom: One Life to Live
Rating: R for this chapter, and definitely for the next one.
Summary: Oliver Fish met Kyle Lewis in college. It changed his life forever.
A/N: Thanks so much for reading this. I'm upping this to R. I am not a graphic smut writer, and in particular, I get very worried that I'm doing a disservice to the characters and ( Read more... )

kyle/fish, one life to live, fanfiction, *slash

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kish lovin abaylor22 November 8 2009, 17:50:53 UTC
sooooo good!!!! my mom and niece were bugging me to fix breakfast, but i told then to wait cuz i was getting to the "climax" part. But darn, it ended and there was no sober love making. I must wait. It's ok.it was still worth the read. maybe the best chapter so far. the writing is like a soap. always a cliffhanger. LOVED IT!!

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jyl22075 November 8 2009, 22:19:55 UTC
I just love this story so much. I love that Oliver wasn't able to resist Kyle anymore. Also, I love the conversation between the boys, it feels really authentic. :)

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luvflix December 27 2009, 12:10:31 UTC
That making out scene was incredibly hot - and they haven't even gone all the way yet!!! Please tell me that your story ends on a happy note though - I don't think my little heart would stand it ending with a regretful love making session.

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