Cue the Music!!!

Jun 07, 2007 23:02

Title: Sway
Author: Phoenix Angel Suyari
Rating: NC-17
Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17Chapter rating: NC-17 ( Read more... )

yaoi, transgender, naruto/neji, naruto fic, fanfiction, sway, mpreg

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ayonoi June 8 2007, 03:25:34 UTC
*much looooovveee tooo youuuuu*

I have to say that I was like OMG! when you were describing the council deliberations, I wanted to slap everyone for being soooo UGH! You did a good job making me hate the council. I already did anyway XD.

The one thing that made me laugh real hard was when Neji saw Takashi dressed in a kimono and almost fell off the roof, I could see it because it was probably very shocking and when it comes to Takashi, usually Neji responses are very non-Neji. I am wondering seriously if the only one who eventually will figure out that Takashi is really Neji's is Hinata. Although I believe the Hyuuga council will be suspicious. Will Tsunade ever find out from Naruto. Hell, will Neji ever find out about Naruto being a vessel and Takashi being a vessel as well?

And the sex...HOT. Both Uchihas are really out of luck although probably Sasuke will be more pissed off than Itachi (I can hear Kisame laughing at Itachi for leaving the "girl" in the village XD). You get the Kisame icon XD

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suyari June 8 2007, 03:38:02 UTC
*happy sigh*

All is right with the world.

Welcome back!

While you have been away, the chapters that are the twenties have been pwning me hard. Here's hoping I can answer those for you soon.

Even though we both know I already know the answers. ;p

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ayonoi June 8 2007, 03:57:33 UTC
It is GREAT to be back, especially when there are gifts like this! *___*

You are in the twenties??!! OMGOTH! You should not have told me because I am going to whine at you XD. Sorry you've had so much trouble with them but it will be worth it, believe me, you can work really good twists and turns. I have to admit that I *really* want to see Itachi and/or Sasuke. Now that the Akatsuki tried to get Naruto, you did not mention exactly who it was. Must you kill me like this? yes, probably XD.

I am glad I am back for the updates!

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suyari June 8 2007, 04:06:52 UTC
OH...ayonoi, I have well and truly missed you. And because I have missed you, I will let you in on a little secret... <.< >.> ^.^

Remember that poll I said I should start doing? ;p

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neeree June 8 2007, 03:50:01 UTC
YES!!! a real smut scene. The others where good but in this they are in their natural forms. so...YES!!!
And I can't believe that they are okay with reviling it like that, and so early, Taka-chan is still a baby. Hope nobody finds out about Taka-chan being Neji's kid even if they find out NaruNeji. Can't wait to see what happens next :)

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suyari June 8 2007, 04:11:29 UTC
Ha! I just finished joking about that! I said, "Haha! I have posted chapter eighteen! Can you believe it took me eighteen chapters to get to the gay sex?!" To which inklacedfeather just looked at me and laughed.

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neeree June 8 2007, 05:30:52 UTC
when you put it that way...i have to also just look at you and laugh. HAHAHA

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suyari June 9 2007, 03:09:57 UTC
;)

Usually, I'm much quicker to arrive at it.

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mistressswitch June 8 2007, 03:54:59 UTC
*sighs happily* I love you. But Poor Neji... thats gotta be killing him... I'm having so much trouble being here for just the summer without my kids and they aren't even really mine! good installment I can go to bed happy now.

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suyari June 8 2007, 04:12:53 UTC
Thank you. Sweet prony dreams!!

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mistressswitch June 8 2007, 04:17:21 UTC
oh to be sure.

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suyari June 8 2007, 04:29:28 UTC
;p

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suede_rose June 8 2007, 03:57:29 UTC
What was the villagers' reaction on Takashi in general? Did they give him the same treatment as when Naruto was a child?

Heh, Neji's sudden small jealousy of Kiba .. lol.

Somehow I'm kinda think that Kakashi just might figure out the truth a bit sooner (and perhaps Shika n Hinata), not sure what brings that on but they are just a too perceptive individuals ..

Ah well, enough rambling

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suyari June 8 2007, 04:14:37 UTC
Well, if it helps, the next chapter deals with all of that. Though, not likely in a way anyone will expect. Random seems to be my MO.

XD

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mallrats2007 June 8 2007, 04:39:09 UTC
ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS OMG

PS I saw that you bday is coming up so hopefully i want forget to post you a happy bday in my journal one Q: what your all time fave pairing?????????????? @_@

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suyari June 9 2007, 03:00:43 UTC
;p

In what fandom? Or do you mean overall?

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mallrats2007 June 9 2007, 21:09:15 UTC
overall your fave pairing

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suyari June 10 2007, 22:36:19 UTC
Is an OT3.

Sirius/Remus/James.

(HP)

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