Too Far

[suteii]

Title: Too Far!
Author: Stephie
Pairing: YabuHika, Inoobu
Genre: Angsty Fluff I guess
Rating: Pg-13
Disclaimer Obviously not mine, you can’t own people! Maybe in the past, but not now!
Summary: After being caught in the act, by Hikaru, Yabu must convince his lover that he really does love him and that this “accident” was only to make Hikaru jealous

Comments

[suteii]

Thanks for reading... I wasn't expecting any comments on this story for a couple days... im going to x-post it on the heysay_fanfic comm on saturday to celebrate Yabu's b-day!

I'm glad you liked it though...Yabu is weird, this isn't my type of writing so I'm glad it worked

[suteii]

YOU FORGOT YABU'S BIRTHDAY!!! *shocked* don't apologize for commenting earlier... I just wasn't expecting it....I expected more why their dinner burned comments, so this one took me by surprise I guess.

hmm....yesh it works..maa..ur an awesome writer so any style of writing also suits u..hehe... really? I don't think so, but if you say so and I'm glad you think so

[eemir_eera]

Huwaaaa......>.<...

Love is really blind...even after saw his bf with another guy...>.<..

but what to do..^__^...hikka love yabu anyway....

[suteii]

Well "love is blind" is really what I was going for, so I'm glad you picked up on that....

thanks for reading and commenting....

[suteii]

Really!? One of my best fics? I've only wrote like what 5? I don't think there are enough stories to create a best one yet. I'm still polishing my skills, trying out different genres, pairings etc.

Don't fume to the birthday boy! He deserves love on his birthday not hate! Love the boy...Hikaru and Inoo obviously do.

Umm well it is a one-shot so I guess you have to come up with your own conclusions although, I was requested for a sequel or to make it a multi-chap....what do you think I should do? That doughnut sounds so good right now...and considering I haven't eaten anything since like 2pm a bowl of rocks would sound good....

as always thanks for reading and commenting

[tokidoki_sama]

OMGosh... so for Yabu's birthday...you made him... a player? ....XD Hahaha!!! Thats a new one! :) As per usual, your fic rocks my socks! It was cute...but I can't help but feel bad for Hikaru....

[suteii]

Apparently I did... seriously I didn't even realize that until you pointed it out... I mean i wrote him as the player but for his birthday it seriously was not my intention....

I'm glad it rocked your socks lol as always thanks for reading and commenting, i feel bad for Hikaru as well...and I was requested for a sequel or to make it a multi-chap....what do you think I should do?

[tokidoki_sama]

LOL it's okay...I thought it was funny! :)

Hm...I think you should do what you want...if you don't feel inspired to write a multi-chap on it then that might be difficult... If you really wanna know what I think... I think Hikaru should dump Yabu's cheating ass and get with Daiki... but that's just my opinion...it doesn't count...XD LOL

[suteii]

Hikaru and Dai-chan eh? Hmm I'll think about it... Thanks for your opinion.

[ain_chan]

Awww~ this fic is somehow~ cuute~ XDDD

omg, Yabu! BAD YABU!

*spanked Yabu*

XDDD poor hikaru~ *glomped hikaru*

good thing daichan's there~ ^^

XDDDD oh, Inoo.. *sigh* hopefully, you didnt fall for Yabu~

XDD srsly, hurt hikaru.. its really hard to see a hurt hikaru~ XDDD

[suteii]

Well I did try to put the Cute in there, so I'm glad you noticed it.

I wouldn't spank Yabu though, he may like it too much! lol jk. Besides thats Hikaru's job, or Inoo's, or Takaki's or Daiki's depending on what you ship with him.

Aww I'm sorry that I hurt Hikaru, I made it better though, at least, right?

Thanks for reading and commenting