I wasn't expecting the ending of this chapter! A stroke? I really can't even imagine what's going to happen next and I'm so curious! So many things, so many feelings...
But I'm so glad Jin was able to defend himself and be safe till he got home (although to me, his real home is where the others are, because that's where he felt happy).
spot first before reading!! excited!! you have no idea how many time i check your journal everyday to see an update.. haha, at last it's here!! 2 hours before my major exam!!! hahaha
...wow.. he got home. HE GOT HOME! i was kinda expecting jae to turn up when he was fighting with that guy, but oh well.
urgh. a sick father is never a good news. i'm thinking that he'll blackmail yunho in working for the company/marrying a rich, bitchy girl, having grandchildren, and such things.
I know right! T__T That's a really BAD surprise! Not like he needed something like that to happen... Oh and I'll try to be quick but I'm CHO BUSY with school, that's why it took almost two weeks to update! >__< Thanks for reading!
It's interesting to see how much Yunho has change. He can protect himself now physically and can take care of himself.
I guess the situation now would really depend on how you see it.
Bad as in Yunho now has no chance of escaping the shackles of being the heir. He will have to take over the family business and this would mean getting married and have a baby heir. No Jaejoong in the picture and if they do get to getting it would be road paved to hell.
Good as in Yunho now has a chance to be a man. If he plays his cards right and do the right things, he will be able to help Jaejoong and everyone in the house to have a better life and get to be with Jaejoong.
I am interested to see how you will write the plot from here on.
He has grown a lot from the things he went through during his time with Jaejoong. That's good. It was part of the reason why I sent him on such an adventure.
You are completely right. The responsibility will fall harder on him now. He is not entirely bound by this heritage, but he doesn't have much choice. That's right. However, Jaejoong is not out of the picture either. It's not the end for them. :)
Wow, I feel kinda pressured? XD I hope I won't disappoint you~ I have much planned~
Thank you for reading and for leaving such an insightful comment. ♥
Very well done . I like how you've successfully managed to reverse YunJae's characters at the beginning . We know that Yunho is the toughest one usually , but you gave this trait to Jae and it made us see a different version of him . I love your way of reflecting on their emotions . I imagine Jae to be softer and more open when it comes to declaring his feelings towards Yunho ; it seems to me that he speaks to him from the depth of his soul whenever he expresses his feelings of worry or love .
Thank you! I happen to like writing Jaejoong as the tough guy, because despite his fragile looks and cheerful personality, we all know how strong he is. I also get the feeling from him that he might even become quite scary when someone hurts his loved ones. He seems loyal, dedicated. As for Yunho, despite his manly looks and leadership skills, I think he has a sensitive, vulnerable side to him. It's important to remember that he has feelings too and that he's expected to feel depressed and break down at times.
In this story, Jaejoong's love for Yunho is incredibly strong and raw. He has changed a lot and does become a different person in such cases as this one. I do tend to go all out on the descriptions and to draw a window on my characters' souls for the readers to see what's inside their heads. I'm glad you don't dislike it for being too long/boring. :)
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I really can't even imagine what's going to happen next and I'm so curious! So many things, so many feelings...
But I'm so glad Jin was able to defend himself and be safe till he got home (although to me, his real home is where the others are, because that's where he felt happy).
I'll be waiting for the next chapter! ^^
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This is not the end of the trouble, indeed. At least Yunho is in safety for now though! So much could have happened...
I'll try to be fast! But aish! So busy with school!
Thanks for reading!
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excited!!
you have no idea how many time i check your journal everyday to see an update.. haha, at last it's here!! 2 hours before my major exam!!! hahaha
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urgh. a sick father is never a good news. i'm thinking that he'll blackmail yunho in working for the company/marrying a rich, bitchy girl, having grandchildren, and such things.
another addition to the long list of problems.
thanks for the update :)
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Wow, so much sympathy for the Dad~ :P You don't feel sorry for him even a little? He's not an evil person... Though he does have his shortcomings...
Yup. More trouble. Isn't this so like me to do this?! :P
Thank YOU for reading!
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poor guy! I wonder what gonna happen
Tha ms for the chapter bb!!!!! Amazing and freaking kickass as always ^^
update soon??? <333333
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I guess the situation now would really depend on how you see it.
Bad as in Yunho now has no chance of escaping the shackles of being the heir.
He will have to take over the family business and this would mean getting married and have a baby heir.
No Jaejoong in the picture and if they do get to getting it would be road paved to hell.
Good as in Yunho now has a chance to be a man.
If he plays his cards right and do the right things, he will be able to help Jaejoong and everyone in the house to have a better life and get to be with Jaejoong.
I am interested to see how you will write the plot from here on.
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You are completely right. The responsibility will fall harder on him now. He is not entirely bound by this heritage, but he doesn't have much choice. That's right. However, Jaejoong is not out of the picture either. It's not the end for them. :)
Wow, I feel kinda pressured? XD I hope I won't disappoint you~ I have much planned~
Thank you for reading and for leaving such an insightful comment. ♥
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I'm waiting :))))
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In this story, Jaejoong's love for Yunho is incredibly strong and raw. He has changed a lot and does become a different person in such cases as this one. I do tend to go all out on the descriptions and to draw a window on my characters' souls for the readers to see what's inside their heads. I'm glad you don't dislike it for being too long/boring. :)
Thank you! ♥
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