Comments | susnemuznae: Pudge/M/Joick

susnemuznae

Pudge/M/Joick

Jun 11, 2009 23:36

Title: Pudge
Rating: NC-17
Warning: Slash
Summary: Joe loves Nick's little, tiny, microscopic tummy.
Disclaimer: This is all a figment of your imagination!
A/N: Dedicated to slowwdownsugar because she wanted me to write this. ily Jenananana! & this is my... comeback fic, I guess you could say? I hope it's a good comeback fic :)

( Pudge! )

joick, jonasbrothers

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iheartvmars07 June 12 2009, 08:26:27 UTC

Everyone knows Nick is a whore and we love him for it ;)
I really love this, there's been a lot of joick nick focused body fics but this just really hit the stop.
I was looking for actual tummy kissing and cuddling, and you put out :)
Nicks tummy is just so adorable how can you not want that?
Also, really like the holding off on cumming on Nicks part, idrky but I do :D

Plus I love the word Pudge, it's cute.

iheartvmars07 June 12 2009, 08:28:08 UTC

And welcome back, please don't leave again, there's not nearly enough good joick writes out there and it pains me to see one who does write :)

susnemuznae June 12 2009, 15:48:01 UTC

Awww you're such a sweetheart ^_^ I'm really glad you liked it and I feel so special that you don't want me to leeaavve *hugs joo* Thank you so so much :)

raelouise June 12 2009, 09:49:13 UTC

Tummy pudge is such a fetish of mine, and so of course Nick's is no exception.
Puppy fat & whore & obeying Joe's command to wait?
Definitely put a smile on my face, awesome XD.

susnemuznae June 12 2009, 15:48:37 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it :)

shkmhlove June 12 2009, 14:31:58 UTC

Joe has a good reason to love Nick's pudge..

I loved how Nick and Joe both knew that he was a whore..

susnemuznae June 12 2009, 15:46:39 UTC

I know! :D & thank you so much for reviewing, I really appreciate it <3

yoniceface June 12 2009, 17:31:32 UTC

this was so hot(:

susnemuznae June 12 2009, 17:43:46 UTC

Why thank you, I'm glad you liked it and that you reviewed :)

immaculate_beam June 12 2009, 23:49:19 UTC

Yes, Nick's tummy is part of what makes him ~gawgeous.~ Joe loving it is even better.

Oh, and Nick holding back his come... *uses inhaler*

susnemuznae June 13 2009, 00:20:33 UTC

I know! Haha

I'm surprised because a couple of people have commented on Nick holding back and how they liked it, idky! Hahaha

susnemuznae June 13 2009, 00:20:50 UTC

oh and btw, your icon = <33333333

immaculate_beam June 13 2009, 02:34:03 UTC

AND I LOVE YOUR ICON, AS WELL! :D

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