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Seasons Change-Sushi_Fic!

Oct 07, 2006 00:31

Author: blugreendreams

Title: Seasons Change

Rating:PG, Nuttin' special rating wise.

Characters: M/I, light mention of crew and Sushi!

Authors Note: All this belongs to other folk. Some are Joss' some are terimaru's . I thank them both for letting me play in their worlds. I'm going to let you folk decide where to put this. It is basiclly an expansion on "Went to ( Read more... )

Comments 13

terimaru October 7 2006, 07:08:22 UTC

Awww, I loved it!!! So sweet and just right. Actually, this will go first, cause my story happens the night after the carnival. I loved the kiss and the last line was perfect. :-)

You also get extra points for doing your homework and getting the canon right - even down to having Inara say the right thing when she gets Sushi. Good eye for detail!

More Sushi!Fic. Fantastic. You know you can't stop at just one. There's lots of room in this fandom for filler fics.

Thank you so much for writing. I loved to be entertained!

terimaru October 7 2006, 07:11:19 UTC

Also, I loved these lines.

“The fish is crew?”

She grinned “He is now.”

Heh. Cute.

blugreendreams October 7 2006, 12:16:31 UTC

Yea! She likes it. ::dances::

Is the title okay, I fear it's kinda weak? I am takin' suggestions there.

Thanks, I am so glad you like it.

terimaru October 7 2006, 14:56:53 UTC

You know, it's just me, but I love the title. It's got LAYERS. More is changing than just the season!!! I read this again this morning. So cute! I was grinning when it was finsihed. (that's a good thing)

“Mal,” Inara took the apple and said, voice pleading,” Just shoot the ducks, please?” I keep finding things to love here. :-)She knows him so well.

(One little thing (Zoë and I up at the top) I think this would be Zoë and me.)

I honestly hope you do more. *Sends you sparkly purple fairy dust for your keyboard*

terimaru October 7 2006, 14:58:55 UTC

You should post this to mal_inara too!

blugreendreams October 7 2006, 15:09:17 UTC

It's on the list. I'm gonna post it at FFFans.net, too. :0)

Okay, so that's a second on the title thing. i was worried I was the only one who would see it.

Shiny.

Fairy dust is always welcome, as my prompt fic is only half done!
Thanks!

isha_libran October 7 2006, 16:40:56 UTC

Aww. Lovely. I especially like this bit:

“The fish is crew?”

She grinned. “He is now.”

Great stuff, dear! *G*

And also, I happen to like the title, too. =)

paiger1218 October 7 2006, 23:58:54 UTC

SQUEE! I loved this!!! Mmmm, yay for caramel apples, I love Fall! (looks at her dusty Ethan/Zoe fic and grins) maybe this is a sign for me to start working again...

terimaru October 9 2006, 12:50:48 UTC

Dust!!!

elizalavelle October 8 2006, 00:02:21 UTC

Very adorable! I love this start to their relationship :)