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susanjn

A Battle of Wills - Chapter 2

Jan 15, 2009 01:10

Allan carried the tray up the narrow staircase and then awkwardly balanced it against the wall. He pulled the key out of his pocket and turned it in the lock.

Allan took a deep breath and turned the handle. The old door squeaked on its hinges. Allan prepared to dodge whatever 'projectile' Guy was going to throw at him today.

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colliedog29 January 14 2009, 20:01:41 UTC

nice work! :)looking forward to the next installment

susanjn January 14 2009, 20:05:36 UTC

Thanks :) P.S. Your puppy is so cute!

cila81 January 14 2009, 22:29:24 UTC

That was lovely! Great work! I'm looking forward to more :D

betty_eyes January 14 2009, 23:14:28 UTC

This is great! Are you planning to continue it? I hope so!!! I'll be waiting!

susanjn January 14 2009, 23:50:36 UTC

Thanks for your encouraging words c and b_e! More will be up later :)

idiot17 January 15 2009, 06:48:32 UTC

Really enjoyed that. Hope you post the next chapter soon.

susanjn January 15 2009, 06:55:24 UTC

Hey :) I'm glad you liked it. More later on...