FANFIC | Velvets & Reds

Feb 12, 2009 01:11

Title: Velvets & Reds
Author: Kitoky
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian
Characters/Pairings: Caspian, Peter, Lucy, Susan, OC; Susan/Caspian
Rating: K+
Summary: There was a lot of red.
Disclaimer: All rights go to CS Lewis, Walden Media, etc. SERIOUS FLUFF
Author's Note: Written for susancaspian weekly drabble challenge #24: celebration. Writing this ( Read more... )

fanfiction: weekly drabble challenge, author: kitoky, weekly challenge #24: celebration, rating: k+

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1smut_princess February 12 2009, 09:02:34 UTC
Bwhahahaha *roflcopter*
Yeah, I think that the chances of any child of Caspian and Su having bad hair are like... a few gabillions to a fraction of pi. And the ...Give it a few more glasses.../...and decided that Peter was not worthy of a kiss, not even from a Minotaur.. was freakin' zomfg epic in wasy that they have yet to describe for it's sheer epicness.

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kitoky February 12 2009, 15:13:09 UTC
It's a freaking miracle that I was able to sprout this little piece after I read your response. I still feel depressed, geez!

Only when they are completely inebriated would I ever consider anything Peter/Caspian. xDxD And it's such fun to write them drunk---though I think this is the first time I've done so.

Thanks for reading, sweets! ;)

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angelikus666 February 12 2009, 10:22:05 UTC
omg, this is just so *squee* and *awwww*
*sigh*

i love the name Sirian!
suits better as Caspian's son!
weeeeee!

great job!
love the ending as well (^_^)

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kitoky February 12 2009, 15:14:13 UTC
Sirian started out as Sylian and I decided that I didn't like the name and suddenly Sirian appeared, so that worked out. Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it. =]

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elimaru February 12 2009, 12:01:30 UTC
"You, my boy, are going to have beautiful hair."
^^ Great line! I loved this fic--very entertaining! My morning needed this! :D

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kitoky February 12 2009, 15:15:26 UTC
I didn't expect to the end the fic with Caspian imparting wisdom on Sirian but it worked out so well. Lol. And let's just face facts. That kid would have beautiful hair.

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kitoky February 12 2009, 15:17:15 UTC
You can't possibly expect a wasted king to impart grand wisdom. It's an impossibility that not even Aslan could muster. Though..... Aslan would not be drunk, although if he did get drunk, I'd like to see him try to impart wisdm and mystery. Haha. This is bringing me ideas I should not be having.

Glad you liked it and thanks for readng. <3

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kitoky February 12 2009, 23:48:16 UTC
I actually had your Sulian in mind when I started writing it Sylian, and thought it was too close and didn't like how it felt---so it was Sirian... Lol, but apparently it still reminds you of Sulian.

Glad you enjoyed it. :D

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