Fic: Pitter-Pattering Means That Trouble Is Afoot 1/1 PG13

[1smut_princess]

Title: Pitter-Pattering Means Trouble Is Afoot
Author: Rhion
Rating: PG13 - Susan has a potty mouth. Or is it potty mind?
Summary: Scampering of little feet in the Narnia-Telmarine castle can be ever so troublesome. Particularly if those feet belong to Caspian and Susan’s offspring.
Disclaimer: Me no own, you no sue.
Category: FLUFF!
Word Count: 1531
AN

Comments

[jedimastereowyn]

That was adorable! I love Caspian having to hit the deck to avoid the crossbow bolt for some reason...

[1smut_princess]

It was just one of those weird things that sorta happened, the image popped into my head, and was too perfect. Especially to demonstrate the sort of relationship those two have after 5yrs together...

[jedimastereowyn]

I agree, it is perfect (not to mention hilarious). It also shows how in tune they are (Caspian knowing to drop, and Susan instinctively knowing to pull up), without making them TOO in tune.

[in_excelsis_dea]

Aww, so sweet. I loved Caspian having to dive to the floor to avoid being feathered, and the interaction between the two kids was just adorable. Great job, I loved it.

[1smut_princess]

Fankoo, fankoo, fankoo *bows*
And I thought it'd be funny that it was Su who wound up bein' all weapons happy, she's already turning a bit bloodthirsty in Lurking, and that it was Caspian who was all unruffled by her agressiveness. Nice role reversal. *giggling*

[blackcathollow]

i swear your reading my mind, i just read Kitoky's fic and wanted more casue babies and here they are. I swear two days in a row you read my mind, stop using that probe on my mind. Its not fun anymore!

Anywho amazing, cute name for the girl very different which is nice. They would have different names. Pure fluff is just what i needed to make me feel better after a day of work that ended in knee pain and back pain.

[1smut_princess]

Probe? What probe? *glances at hands and notices you noticing the contraption in her hands, then promptly tucks it behind back whistling innocently*
*hands bag of frozen peas and a towel*15 minutes on the knee, 15 off - it helps bring blood to the swollen area, decrease swelling, and helps with pain in general. But don't leave it on for more than 15 mins at a time, that's what the physical therapists say. *points to mom*She's had 4 knee surguries, and years of PT for it. And I've spent years nagging her to actually listen to the PT person... Oh! And use the towel to prevent actual on skin contact with somethin' so cold - that can shock the area too.

[kitoky]

OMFG, HECK YES.

[flails for about ten minutes before she buckles down to write a comprehensible comment]

Domestic Casue + KIDS is just for the epic win. LOL, Caspian's the mother hen of the two. I'm trying to picture Dark!Caspian being a mother hen and it's just so hilarious. Seriously.

“Oh look at you, you just used a contraction,” rolling her eyes, Susan set her crossbow down and clapped mockingly as he pulled the door open, revealing their children. "You're learning!" I LOL'd at this, seriously. xD It's fantastic.

“I swore,” interrupting him, Susan crossed her arms, cocking her hip.

His look said it all, “And you still do. And I have never said that you were seemly in any fashion at all, now have I?”
Susan would soooo put his ass on the couch for that comment, but I suppose 5+ years together would teach them a thing or two about one another. <3 Win.

[kitoky]

ALSO. I would just like to say that you can't possibly be mortal because to be able to sprout out so many awesome fics, YOU SIMPLE MUST BE A DEITY. <333

[1smut_princess]

I think Lucyfer already elevated me to demi-god a few months ago. It may've worn off. I'm not too sure... And I still need 11 legal aged adults to be able to file for tax-exempt status.
Eh, the Pitter-Patter is a bit rough 'round the edges, needs some touching up *sees several glaring things in need of fixing* Eh, I'll get to it later...
But actually D!C bein' the mother hen would make sense, he's so possessive and hellbent on protecting what is his that he'd constantly worry over his babies that can't defend themselves. Don'cha think?

[kitoky]

That's true, I suppose we're just seeing the gentle side of him being possessive and hellbent. I bet all the servants are just FRIGHTENED when it comes to his kids. There's always that threat of his past history though since he was basically forced to learn to fend for himself, the change of him wanting to protect his offspring's gotta be big. Or it's just Susan.

[phoenke]

Squeeeeee! Oooooh, so, so adorable! CasueBABIES are the best, they are so cute :D

I just LOVE your Mommy!Su and Babydaddy!Caspian. They are so perfect for each other, teasing each other and you can just tell they'll be in love till they're old and grey!

[kitoky]

Babydaddy!Caspian. Hahahahah. Win. <3

[1smut_princess]

Heh, unfortunately with how hard Su works she'll wind up gray, and Caspian will probably thrive on the conflict of bustin' his butt.