Well I'm working on a short story, yes it's short, for reals, for some Bear/Caspian fluffy goodness. I'm thinking that with an injection of some fluff I'll be able to climb back into Amnesia!Caspian's headspace. It's a dark and familiar place, and if I'm not careful the abyss will pour ketchup on me and munch me up as a tasty snack otherwise.
Well you're just awesome in general. But are we talking about 'awesome hotdogs' awesome, or are we talking 'holy crap that blackhole inspires shock and awe in me at its beauty and violence' awesome? Or perhaps "A few million awesome hotdogs" awesome? *will give cookies to those who can figure out where that mangled quote came from*
I loved how that Caspian-Seymour scene played out at the very beginning.
All thoughout this chapter, from what we've seen of Caspian's battle with himself, I kept pondering on what Susan must be feeling. Like I want to read things from her perspectives and how she's feeling. When Caspian was avoiding her, I couldn't help but feel incredibly sad for her because it feels as though she's so alone in a different way than Caspian. Caspian's alone in his own mind and Susan's alone in a crowd.
I may do some SuPOV for this now that you mention it, but they'll be companion pieces, good idea, hadn't thought of that. Strange, I adore Su, and love to explore her personality and psychology - but from an outside pov, not from the internal. Like... how someoneelse percieves her actions, and the reasons for them, rather than how she herself feels about those things. I really, really need to work on that. Because most of what I'm writing winds up so Caspian heavy on the pov, that it almost gets boring to write. Not because i don't love him, but while his view of things is plenty interesting, it just... gets tiring to always keep in his headspace. If that makes sense.
A change in POV is always nice. And it'll give us a chance to get to really know what kind of person "Susie Fisher" is that isn't from Caspian's perspective.
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But keep up the chapters, i need more... its a drug... my addiction....
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Or perhaps "A few million awesome hotdogs" awesome?
*will give cookies to those who can figure out where that mangled quote came from*
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All thoughout this chapter, from what we've seen of Caspian's battle with himself, I kept pondering on what Susan must be feeling. Like I want to read things from her perspectives and how she's feeling. When Caspian was avoiding her, I couldn't help but feel incredibly sad for her because it feels as though she's so alone in a different way than Caspian. Caspian's alone in his own mind and Susan's alone in a crowd.
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