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FANFIC | Of Hearts Unknown - Chapter 07

Jan 11, 2009 14:34

Title - Of Hearts Unknown - CHAPTER SEVEN: Darkness Rising
Author - Kitoky
Fandom - Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian (Movie Verse)
Characters/Pairings - All; Susan/Caspian
Rating - Chapter rating: T, Overall: M
Status - Not Complete
Summary - An old foe in a new form.
WARNING - This is basically an alternative story to Prince Caspian. It's movie!based ( Read more... )

rating: t, author: kitoky, fanfiction: of hearts unknown

Comments 6

elimaru January 11 2009, 22:20:57 UTC

Wait, so...WHAT? At the very end of the last part, did Glozelle get posessed or something? And why did Donnon keep saying "My Queen"? Sorry...I'm easily confused.

But other than that, it's amazing as always! I keep dying for the next part!!! :D

kitoky January 12 2009, 04:45:49 UTC

Eventually everything will get explained. There has to be a certain mystery to what happens, why it happens, and what it means or the story would be completely boring!

pinknarnian717 January 13 2009, 01:27:50 UTC

omg thats intense...but good when's chapter 8 coming??

girls_are_weird January 14 2009, 01:39:41 UTC

He had been shot… by friendly fire? --> oh, man. if that was nikabrik, i'm going to be pissed... that's one other character who, like sopespian, just has to die, really soon if possible. *shakes head*

as far as the ending of the chapter goes... geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez. and of course it's going to take you longer to have the next chapter done, it's just our karma. thanks for that cliffhanger of death, hun. *clings onto kit's leg and begs for next chapter*

and good luck with the new semester! ^-^

ext_4554249 March 6 2018, 13:57:06 UTC

I know it’s like forever after you wrote this and I don’t even know if you remember that you wrote this story, but you never concluded it and it’s killing me. :) So, maybe finish it if you can? Heh.

kitoky March 7 2018, 05:54:50 UTC

Golly. Forever is right. And I'd be lying if I said I didn't think of this fic every so often and by this point, I've forgotten a lot of what I had planned for this so much that my story notes aren't really doing it for me anymore. BUT I hear you, I really do. And you're a lucky bastard 'cuz you reached out literally on my birthday and so that timing just really guilt-trips me so I'm gonna do my darndest to kind of wrap this up in a somewhat satisfying conclusion. I can't promise it'll be something spectacular but I hope I can do the story justice. And who doesn't want more Susan/Caspian amirite? Thanks for dropping the note. :)