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FANFIC | Of Hearts Unknown - Chapter 04

Jan 05, 2009 02:13

Title - Of Hearts Unknown - CHAPTER FOUR: Myths and Legends
Author - kitoky
Fandom - Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian (Movie Verse)
Characters/Pairings - All; Susan/Caspian
Rating - Chapter rating: T, Overall: M
Status - Not Complete
Summary - It was supposed to be simple. They open the gates, draw the bridge, and infiltrate the castle. It was ( Read more... )

rating: t, author: kitoky, fanfiction: of hearts unknown

Comments 12

xxlucyferxx January 5 2009, 10:47:21 UTC

WOW. Just...wow.

Eep, this story has me quite literally on the edge of my seat. Oh, Susan...:(

blackcathollow January 5 2009, 10:57:08 UTC

not bad after suffering from writers block. Quite good actually.

Hopefully you won't hit a road block with the next chapter cuz this story is getting good.

kitoky January 5 2009, 20:33:37 UTC

I've already started working on the next part, and half of it's already been written with a few details here and there so it shouldn't be a problem. Well, I said that about this chapter as well so we'll see.

kitoky January 5 2009, 20:32:50 UTC

Thanks for following the story! It only gets more intense, and I think after this next chapter, it'll pick up quite a bit pace-wise. =]

stephie_nhbg January 5 2009, 12:28:39 UTC

Another awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one, :).

kitoky January 5 2009, 20:33:59 UTC

Thanks for the review! :D Will get the next one up soon.

girls_are_weird January 6 2009, 02:32:16 UTC

“I’ve better go check on the others and make sure Nikabrik doesn’t plummet to his death... --> no, wait, peter...! xDDD

yay for offensive! i was waiting for the attack to happen. can't wait for the next part! ^-^

kitoky January 6 2009, 03:39:44 UTC

Lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing, as always. <3

angelikus666 January 6 2009, 02:50:33 UTC

“I said I wasn’t hungry!” Lucy protested at his decision to stop

“Well, I am!” The Just King grumbled back. Lucy grinned at her brother’s antics.

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this made me laugh!
oh the suspense is killing me, nonetheless!

kitoky January 6 2009, 03:38:50 UTC

I don't feel like there's any suspense and this just throws me off when you guys say this. xD Until I realize.... I'm writing the fic so... there really is no suspense for me... D:

Thank you for the comment! :D

carpexnocturne January 7 2009, 06:51:23 UTC

8O... MOARRRR WOMAN!

Pwease? *puppy dog eyes*

kitoky January 7 2009, 08:38:00 UTC

Lol. PATIENCE, FIEND! D: Patience is a virture! [imparts the wisdom of Yoda] Patience and storm troopers shall be in your future.