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[shiegra]

Buried Queens
Chpt. 6

Susan Pevensie has been living alone in London since her siblings died, alone with her grief and determination. She's long since abandoned childish fantasies, but her recent dreams of a great lion give her comfort where nothing else does. And then she is catapulted into Narnia again; but a very, very different Narnia indeed.

Comments

[elimaru]

Oh, I LOVE this story! I read all 5 chapters yesterday and I've been dying for the next! Your writing is so captivating...it makes me sort of forget myself for a while. Keep it up! : )

[amethyststeam]

Off-topic, but where did you get the picture for your icon? I'm a little late into this fandom, so I have no idea where people are getting all these lovely pictures of Susan and Caspian! (I mean, I've capped the DVD and seen the movie at least a dozen times and never seen this scene...)

[tianaluthien]

Captivating indeed. This last instalment certainly threw me off (in a good way); what came was not what I was expecting. I'm intrigued especially by what the late (*sob*) Prof Cornelius told Caspian. I also particularly enjoyed your descriptions of Caspian in this section; he is the prince we know, yet not (if that makes sense), and you're doing an excellent job of portraying him as the "perfect predator" (if I may borrow from Twilight): hat first glance is appearance and manner draw you in, yet he radiates menace at the same time.

Very well done. I await the next chapter with the utmost eagerness :)