FANFIC | Of Hearts Unknown - Chapter 03

[kitoky]

Title - Of Hearts Unknown - CHAPTER THREE: Obligations
Author - Kitoky
Fandom - Chronicles of Narnia: Prince Caspian (Movie Verse)
Characters/Pairings - All; Susan/Caspian
Rating - Chapter Rating: T, Overall: M
Status - Not Complete
Summary - Summary - It was supposed to be simple. They open the gates, draw the bridge, and infiltrate the castle. It

Comments

[girls_are_weird]

awwwww, total peter chapter. i love him, so i think it's a given to say that i loved the chapter =P ♥ i'm glad that he's realized the raid was a mistake, and that he apologized to lucy for not believing her.

and i'm also glad that he's giving caspian a chance-- sure, it's probably a huge risk, though i do think maybe after what happened to susan he'll be extra careful and not as impulsive this time around. but still, he's new at this leading thing, so that's always a risk, much like edmund said. but again, i'm glad peter is giving him the chance anyway, because sitting around, sulking and feeling guilty does NOT a good king make, and he's got to earn his title at some point, so...

and darn! *snaps fingers* she was this close to getting away. =/ and it sucks that she's now in the hand of another lord (who seems like even more of a creep. blegh).

anyway, lovely chapter as always ^^ will be waiting for the next one.

[kitoky]

I seriously do feel like I'm writing a Peter introspection. :p But I'm not. And I feel bad because with how I've planned the story, Susan and Caspian don't get much until later. As for now, it's all Peter, Lucy, and Edmund.

And the Gryphons. I use them alot because they're seriously amazing and things. :p

Thanks for the reading and reviewing!! They're always appreciated and very much loved.

[pinknarnian717]

such a good story!!!i love it!!