Fic: Flitter 1/1 G

[1smut_princess]

Title: Flitter
Author: Rhion
Rating: K
Summary: People pass through our lives like butterflies.
Genre: Hurt/Comfort/Fluff
Disclaimer: Me no own, you no sue!

AN: I was talking to Nat and Autumn, and I said that people come and go like butterflies… Which put this idea in my head. Written for the Stolen Moments YahooGroup's Session One Fic Challenge. I

Comments

[stephie_nhbg]

:) you do know how to cheer a girl out of the blues. :) I love this, especially the way it ends, not with a period, but more like an ellipse. A bit like hope. :) very nice rhion. two thumbs way way up :)

[1smut_princess]

Rah-rah-rah! Gimme a 'C' gimme a 'H' and a 'E-E-R'! CHEEER! UP! *rolls pom-poms*
Or how about I just spray some of this nummeh Angel perfume on you? *spritzes* In about 20mins when the perfume settles into your skin you'll keep sniffing whereever it is it's sprayed going "mmmmI smell nummy..."
*sniffs wrist and giggles*I smell nummy!
*probably high off the fumes at the moment so insanity must be forgiven*
That and I'm writing a nice Inigo/Caspian fencing scene..mmmmshirtlessness....
And the story (in my head) actually does end with her staying, I just didn't wanna say "And so she stayed" because that woulda just ruined how it was written... So don't worry! Your hope isn't unfounded!

[1smut_princess]

Fankoo!

[shanynde]

Love the ending, it's beautiful. Keep up the great work. You're an amazing author.

[monicaop]

I loved this, this is hope and love and oh so beautiful!!!

This is how it should have ended!!! Never to leave, just to stay, to remain :)

Love it!! :D hugs!!