Comments | surrenderdammit: on the wrong track, pt9

surrenderdammit

on the wrong track, pt9

Sep 20, 2009 20:15

Kenshin paced back and forth, growling in utter frustration at the situation he found himself in. Jineh was dead; the mad former Assassin he had confronted in the warehouse last night. But so was, almost, a certain stranger that had caused him enough trouble already. She was lying peacefully asleep in Sano’s bed, no wounds but a severe magical ( Read more... )

kenkao, on the wrong track, rurouni kenshin, drabble

Comments 6

odatcat September 21 2009, 01:34:35 UTC

BRILLIANT! I loved her outburst! And poor Kenshin, he would do that to himself. He's going to have a very hard time figuring this one out completely. I really want to see how you're going to get them to the "Good Morning" drabble point. (you know the one, in the alley way, and the milkman, and the cleavage.)

Get better soon. We need to skype. ASAP.

surrenderdammit September 23 2009, 17:00:56 UTC

haha thanks! it was actually her outburst that made me so nervous about this part. seemed so OOC for my Kaoru...ah well. it seemed to work! :D

and, believe me, I'm curious how I'm going to get them there too! XD all I know is that I AM getting them there, with or without their consent, dammit! >_< lol.

anyway yeah I got your mail honey! I'm so sorry I haven't dropped you a message telling you what's going on! I've just been posting journals and stuff. I'll explain why tomorrow when I'll have time to write you a reply to that email.

love you lots sweetie! <3

kokoronagomu September 21 2009, 01:58:12 UTC

apart from a few 'odd' words, i think it made wonderful sense-- and it was quite funny!

i guess trapped magic is like shaking a bottle of soda until the top blows off and half of it shoots out as foam.

i guess he's not going to forget and she's not off the hook.

i really liked this chapter!

surrenderdammit September 23 2009, 16:58:22 UTC

*groan* yeah, I should probably get myself a beta for my stuff...I've been telling myself that for YEARS. nothing's happened though lol. I'm plagued by bad luck when it comes to betas; they usually quit on me XD ah well.

anyway, yes, your comparison is a good one haha bottle of soda indeed! :D

and well...Kaoru won't be off the hook ever. it's all "hook, line and sinker" with Kenshin lol.

jenineji September 21 2009, 02:45:49 UTC

Very nice, I enjoyed very very much. Hope ur fever get better, and I am, seriously, waiting for an update.

surrenderdammit September 23 2009, 16:56:11 UTC

thanks! :D and yeah, I'm hoping I'll get better soon with the new pills I'm taking haha XD thanks again! <3