on the wrong track pt8

[surrenderdammit]

It took Kaoru a while to realize she was in over her head this time around. It hadn’t been enough for her to realize it when seeing Sano on the train with him, following them to their hotel and even stalking them at 2 in the morning - arriving at an abandoned warehouse. No, it wasn’t until a man whose eyes glowed in the dark appeared, seemingly out

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[odatcat]

niiice. interesting twist on the jin'eh bit. verrrrry interested in seeing where you're taking this.

i am freezing cold right now and wishing you were here to snuggle with me.

[surrenderdammit]

haha thanks! :D and yeah, I'm excited about showing you where I'm going with it! lol. I have a few things planned out...just need to write it...

anyway, yes, I want a snuggle. a Molly-snuggle *sniff* miss you love! <3

[surrenderdammit]

haha I'm glad you took time to read it! <3<3 sorry for leaving you with an adrenaline rush at that hour...hope the other update made up for it! XD anyway, thanks for the comment! glad you seem to like it! :) <3

[kokoronagomu]

i guess she's busted-- one could only hope that she could think up a logical excuse for her being there (of course there is none, besides following the two-- unless sano owes her money, or something stupid like that).

you're right-- she is going to be sorry she wakes up.

one wonders how you're going to justify his leaving tomoe for kaoru-- without being the bad guy.

[surrenderdammit]

hahaa the explanation I ended up using was far from logical and Kenshin knew it ;D poor Kaoru! nothing goes right for that girl...ah well ;D I guess she's got me to blame for that >_>

and yes, one wonders how I'm gonna justify that :3 I, of course, know. it'll be interesting to see how people'll react ;D

[surrenderdammit]

hahaha I hope the story isn't disappointing as it moves on! :D glad you've liked it so far! <3<3 and yes, RK and magic is always epic win ;D anyway, thanks again for the comment! :3

[reignashii]

giggles madly* surrender, your story is becoming my very very unhealthy obsession x3 i soooo sooo wanna know what happens next x3 i wonder how kenshin is gonna react? what he's thinking? xD and how sano is gonna if he is will help cover kaoru xD and what story kaoru is gonna come up with x3 hahahahaha rereads whole story for the hell of it*

[surrenderdammit]

yaaay for unhealthy obsessions! 8D I have loads of them, glad to invite you to my club! lol! <3 and awww, re-reading it? that's a very nice compliment right there! 8D thanks for all the sweet comments! <3<3 hope you'll continue to like the story :3