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Pornucopia 2007!

Oct 31, 2007 17:02

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Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) pulsar4529 November 6 2007, 03:23:04 UTC

She found herself pulling up the sticky armrest that separated their seats and shuffling over the rough cloth seats to lean on Daniel's shoulder. The laptop created a soft glow in their mostly empty corner of the aircraft. He reaches over and pulls the red blanket higher, brushing his arm lightly against her chest ( ... )

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) zorb November 6 2007, 03:58:54 UTC

Oh yay, one of my prompts! I love the image of this scene and them just kind of going for it.

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) pulsar4529 November 7 2007, 05:12:00 UTC

Thank you! Some of the credit is going to have to go to the couple behind me on a recent flight though.

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) shutthef_up November 6 2007, 04:08:33 UTC

Oh, I just love the feel of this story!

It's comfortable and yet gives the hint that this isn't something they do a lot. Very familiar, yes, but... well, one of my very favorite ways to see them.

Thanks so much!

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) pulsar4529 November 7 2007, 05:13:13 UTC

No, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) holdouttrout November 6 2007, 04:21:22 UTC

There's something really sweet about this. Very slow and tender.

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) pulsar4529 November 7 2007, 05:15:27 UTC

Thanks! I wanted it to show some softness, but not have it cross over into sap, so I hope it worked.

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) niamaea November 7 2007, 00:10:25 UTC

I love the sweetness and almost-mundane feeling to this, and that they get to feel ordinary for a few minutes. And how comfortable they are with each other! Really, lovely.

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) pulsar4529 November 7 2007, 05:17:08 UTC

I kind of like how acting ordinary for them is still so out there for most people and that they'll do anything for each other.

Thanks!

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) surreallis November 7 2007, 00:50:21 UTC

Ooh! This was awesome! You need to write this stuff more often! :)

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) pulsar4529 November 7 2007, 05:19:43 UTC

I just need to write more period.

I can now blame you for my very first porn ever, and first finished SG1 fic. Hee!

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) abyssinia4077 November 7 2007, 03:53:17 UTC

Aw, this is great. I love them trying to steal a chance to be ordinary (and yet still needing to find some way to turn it into an adrenaline rush) and him knowing her so well. But poor Daniel has to go solo to finish it :(

Yay you writing and yay this being awesome!

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) pulsar4529 November 7 2007, 05:18:48 UTC

But poor Daniel has to go solo to finish it :(

Are you so sure about that?

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) katcorvi November 7 2007, 04:08:58 UTC

That was so lovely and gentle and tactile, too. Wonderful entry into pornucopia!

Re: Sam/Daniel - travel (NC-17) pulsar4529 November 7 2007, 05:18:01 UTC

Thank you! It's my first porn ever so, it's fitting for pornucopia.

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