Chapter 1

[surreal_tuna]

         "Why are we moving to some back-country shit-hole?" I asked.
          "Don't swear in front of your sister, her ears are too young." Mother snapped "I need change, I'm sick of the city."
          "What is the place called again?"
          "East Haven, in the county Essex."
          "I can't believe we're moving to Vermont."
          It was

Comments

[passionate_fun]

its a really good start! I hope that helps a little gotta go to class and then i can comment again later!

[surreal_tuna]

Haha it certainly is encouraging! =D Thanks!