Tin Man fic: Perceptible - Chapter 4/10

Sep 03, 2008 14:08

Title: Perceptible - 4 of 10 ( Read more... )

magic4mula, tinman, perceptible, fanfic, raw/jeb verse

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lionille September 3 2008, 22:44:10 UTC
“There’s a cookie shaped like a frog,” he observed with apprehension. “I’m not sure how I feel about that.”

This was so randome and so Glitch it made me laugh like a loon.

Glitch scratched the back of his head, making the zipper pull jingle.

You added an auditory component to the zipper! This is GENIUS!

“I need more coffee if I’m going to deal with two Cains.”

lol! Poor Glitch. *pours him another cup*

Another awesome installment!

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surranndie September 3 2008, 22:55:31 UTC
*GRIN* That frog cookie was just for you. :D

I've been struggling FOREVER trying to find the right word to describe the sound his zipper makes when he moves the pull. I swear it does make that little "tink" sound in the movie when he zips it up, but there's just no good word for it! I'm glad this one worked!

Poor Glitch indeed! He's got a Pouting!Cain on one side and an EmotionallyStunted!Cain on the other! Most of this chapter is thanks to your suggestion about Glitch trying to give Jeb advice. So - *HUGS!!* :D

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candacestls September 6 2008, 17:13:18 UTC
“I think my father’s trying to set us on fire with his mind.”

LOL, this has become my new favorite line, that and this one:

“There’s a cookie shaped like a frog,” he observed with apprehension. “I’m not sure how I feel about that.”

'Note to self, no amphibian shaped cookie's for Glitch'

Jeb and Raw's first love making was perfect :D

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surranndie September 6 2008, 17:16:28 UTC
*rofl* Oh, boys...they're so silly! :D

*has way too much fun with the devirgining of Jeb* *grin*

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