I'm so happy to see you writing for Persona3. Just a little bit of nitpicking if you don't mind. 'she's going through her attempts one by one', is it meant to be past or present tense?
Other than that I can picture this in mind, one of those quiet moments and so very bittersweet for Akihiko. The characters are spot on and I can just hear Akihiko speaking while I read this.
Hope to see more P3 stuff from you. It's by far one of my favourite games to come out this year. =)
This was originally written in present tense, but I hit a snag near the end when it had to be in past so I went and changed all the obvious tenses, but yeah, I do understand if it ends up sounding as though it was in the present. But yeah, to clarify, it's in the past.
I've only gotten past the October moon, but I also hope I can write more for this fandom. Thank you for your words.
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Other than that I can picture this in mind, one of those quiet moments and so very bittersweet for Akihiko. The characters are spot on and I can just hear Akihiko speaking while I read this.
Hope to see more P3 stuff from you. It's by far one of my favourite games to come out this year. =)
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I've only gotten past the October moon, but I also hope I can write more for this fandom. Thank you for your words.
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