Huh. I like this. Normally I don't go for the R things, and I don't know this fandom from a hole in the wall, but even so, you somehow got me interested. Very well written, with the quick, rushed way words are paced, to help convey the sense of urgency here... I don't know. I really like the word choice, though, and just the way it's written. Well done overall.
Oh my. I can't even find words to express how I felt about this (SRSLY. It's labled 'WAUGH' in my Memories...). I know words that I could use. Hot, being at the forefront of my mind. I can't say it was beautiful, but I can, at the same time, because it was so well done.
I love the 'Pot calling the kettle black' part. Dear me. I also agree with the person above me. I didn't know it was a furture fic at all until it was blatantly put. I loved that about it. And the fact that it might not be Haruhi at the altar at all.
And there really is something special about Kyoya being Tamaki's last fuck. I mean, I couldn't think of a better candidate, but it still made my heart do that little skippy thing. Great job.
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I love the 'Pot calling the kettle black' part. Dear me. I also agree with the person above me. I didn't know it was a furture fic at all until it was blatantly put. I loved that about it. And the fact that it might not be Haruhi at the altar at all.
And there really is something special about Kyoya being Tamaki's last fuck. I mean, I couldn't think of a better candidate, but it still made my heart do that little skippy thing. Great job.
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But Mom and Dad belong TOGETHER!!!!!
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Love how you write this. Hope you'll write more!
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