Fic: The Games We Play - Y is for Yo-Yo

[surena_13]

Title: The Games We Play - Y is for Yo-Yo
Pairing: Sharon Raydor/Andy Flynn
Fandom: Major Crimes
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,325
Summary: The balance between hate and sex has never been that difficult to uphold for Sharon.
Prompt: Y is for Yo-Yo for lady_blackwell
Disclaimer: Not mine
A/N: Written for the ABC fics challenge on tumblr
A/N 2: Thanks to Emma and

Comments

[surena_13]

Uhm yes? I actually had thrown it in the trash at one point before I decided it might not be a lost cause.

I wasn't sure about the characterization mostly. These two recently have almost exclusively been written as an utterly romantic couple and this story is almost anything but. It made me doubt if it was really them and not just two characters I'd made up in my head. So I am really glad you liked it!

And yeah, they sort of had to come together in the end or it would have been just a bleak story.

Oh, and I'm glad you liked the sex, since that at first wasn't going to be the focus of the story.

[isolith]

Goddamn that was beyond hot. Very intense and beautifully written; why ever would you contemplate deleting this at all! So much history in one little moment, absolutely intense and perfect. I love the little evolution at the end. Thank you for writing it =)

[surena_13]

Aw, thank you! I'm really glad you liked it!

I felt like the characterization was off and that idk, it didn't really suit them, even if this is practically my headcanon where it concerns them as a pairing.

So, yeah, thank you for letting me know you liked it.

[urania16]

Oh my...
and then the ending that was so beautiful. I love it how they go from hot and sensual to him being so gentle and sweet with her.

This is a great story and I'm glad they managed to persuade you to post it.

[surena_13]

Well, if anything Andy is the one who realizes his feelings first with all those doe-eyed looks he gave her in season 1.

I'm glad you liked it and that you commented.

[lambrosia]

That was really good!! Loved all the angsty bits and how it went way back. you made it totally believable. The metaphor was real nice <3 and worked really well. the ending was fabulous in it's subtlelty. It was also totally hot.
So don't you dare throw out any of the other stuff you may have floating around on your computer, you'd be depriving us of some real gems!! You're a great writer! And a fellow Dutchie!!

[surena_13]

Oh thank you for that lovely comment!

Trust me I got a lot of stuff floating around on my computer and about 75% of it is crap. So that probably won't ever see the light of day.

And you are dutch too? So that makes 4 in the MC fandom I think. Wow. That's quite a lot for a show that doesn't even have an air date in the Netherlands.

[lambrosia]

Yay for all the crap floating around on your computer. Seriously, if this is what you retrieve from your trash, I get all giddy about what could be on your desktop! I am begging you not to throw out anything just yet.

And yes! I am from Amsterdam. 4 Dutchies in MC fandom, indeed impressive! I even thought there were one or two more. All Mary's doing of course. And how about that air date?!?

[chubbs1484]

I fucking love this.

[surena_13]

Thank you!