Unspoken Thoughts and Useless Decisions

[surena_13]

Fandom: It's Complicated.
Pairing: Jane/Jake
Rating: R, for some words.
Summary: Jake's thoughts about Jane, Agness and everything else that's complicated.
Disclaimer: So not mine. They've all jumped from the wonderful imagination of Nancy Meyers.
A/N: Yay, first It's Complicated fic. I've fallen completely in love with the Jane/Harley pairing, but I

Comments

[ubiquitousmixie]

aawe yay! i'm so glad someone has written jane/jake because i really, really heart them something fierce. i love how you wrote jake's internal dialogue here -- you totally conveyed what he had so clearly been thinking during that scene. sexy as it was to watch her dance, i couldn't help but feel sad for him as he watched her.

thank you SO much for this! soo much love for j/j!

[surena_13]

Thank you! I couldn't resist writing a Jane/Jake fic. They're so good together. Everything about their 'relationship' was wrong and I still wanted her to end up with him.

And I felt sad for him too when he watching her dance. So I tried to put down what was going on in his head. And I'm glad you liked it.

And yes, spread the j/j love!

[kitnkabootle]

Aww Jake/Jane is SO cute. I actually love them too a little bit. I love Alec Baldwin so that's halfway there - but I mean the way he looks at her is so romantic.

You did well!!!

[surena_13]

Aren't they just the best? Well Jane/Harley tops them, but it's easier to imagine Jane with Jake.

I'm glad you liked it!

[kandy4eva]

awwww i love them so much. and i love this from jakes point of view. his realisation on how jane is perfect for him is just so amazing & heartbreaking at the same time... he knows its his own fault and having him watch her dance you can see thoughts like this going through his mind so GREAT read. jane/jake <3

[surena_13]

Thanks! I love them too. I knew she was going to end up with Adam, because he's like the good guy, but I loved Jake, because he's a little bad, but charming and fun.

I'm glad you liked it!

[inthegiggleloop]

I really loved that. Throughout this film I really wantED them to end up together again.

I really loved how you wrote Jake. Great story!

[surena_13]

Thank you very much! I still want them to end up. They were so great together.

[inthegiggleloop]

You're welcome. Me too. They had great chemistry.

[babywonder7]

I was voting for Jane/Jake in the end, until I read Jane/Harley, but this was so cute and amazing that I want more Jane and Jake! Great job!