Burning Room

Aug 02, 2009 21:40



Title: Burning Room
Pairing: Draco and Hermione, :]
Rating: PG-15, for swearing.
Disclaimer: I own nothing, and all that jazz.
Summary: The dangers of being together outweighed the happiness they both wanted desperately. When they would decide to ignore all of those warnings and enter the unknown territory of an love ridden affair, they almost ( Read more... )

fanfiction, fandom: harry potter, pairing: draco/hermione

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graygale August 3 2009, 16:56:55 UTC
WOAH! This was really great to read.

Very intense!

For it's not surprising that Draco would do his best to push Hermione away; seeing as how, he knows how things are going to end. Bottom line, is that in being together neither of them will be getting, 'a happy-ever-after,'; instead they'll just be doomed to suffer knowing they can never truly be happy.

Therefore, Draco is only trying to spare what he can of any future pain, Hermione will have to suffer because of what he's done and who he is.
Although, obviously Hermione isn't willing to let go so easily; because even though, she knows that staying with Draco--means dealing with more possible moments of suffering. She knows that it'll hurt more to be separated from him; therefore, in her mind it's better to suffer together rather than apart and at least, in the meantime, they'll still be together.

Very good, to read. Not to mention, emotional, as well.

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suprockstar August 4 2009, 01:24:13 UTC
OMG THANK YOU!! Thanks so much for the amazing comment, you've definitely made me day! :] I'm so glad that you could almost completely understand the feelings and emotions I tried so hard to convey! ;]

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suprockstar August 7 2009, 00:49:38 UTC
Wow thank you!! :]

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strawberrimelon August 15 2009, 21:36:49 UTC
OMG. This was soooooo good! You have a really great writing style.

I love how intense it is. *sigh* The forbidden love they have. :D

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suprockstar August 16 2009, 00:29:20 UTC
Thank you so much!! :] I'm glad you liked it.

I'm in the process of writing another dramione fic, and I hope people will like it, -nervous-

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strawberrimelon August 16 2009, 00:49:44 UTC
Yay! :D Don't worry, I guarantee I'll love it. XDDD

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suprockstar August 16 2009, 00:55:56 UTC
LOL okay! : P

have you written any ff? :]

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silvia_elisa August 22 2009, 06:10:19 UTC
This was a great piece to wake up to!
Very very intense! And your style is soooo good! The words you use and the sentences you make... the description was so alive I almost felt like shaking Hermione myself!
I liked that you didn't end it with 'and they lived happily ever after' because all the things Draco said (very IC by the way) are true, but regret of never having even tried would be worse :(
Loved it. I'm going to copy and paste this on banter too.

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suprockstar August 22 2009, 21:16:18 UTC
Wow thank you so much!! You have no idea how much your kind words mean to me. :D I'm so glad you liked it.

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