Happy Ending

Jan 28, 2009 22:36


Title: Happy Ending
Pairing: Rob and Kristen, Who else? :)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own nothing, except my attempt at writing this angsty oneshots.
Summary: This is inspired by Mika's "Happy Ending" which is an AHMAZING song. So these lines from the chorus perfectly explains what this story is about.

This is the way you left me,
I'm not pretending.
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rpf: rob/kristen, fanfiction

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i_dont_mind January 30 2009, 03:10:03 UTC
absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking darling ♥ i love that song and you managed to make it breathe these two. well, well done ;)

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suprockstar February 1 2009, 02:15:22 UTC
Wow thank you so much. I'm totally in LOVE with that song, its so beautiful and when I heard it was like inspiration for this fic just hit me in the face and I HAD to get it down. =)

Anyway I'm so glad you liked it! =)

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seluciav January 30 2009, 03:15:24 UTC
Please forgive the parade of profanity that is about to be unleashed here but: HOLY FUCKING CHRIST ON CRUTCHES WOMAN!!!!

You have killed me. Killed me, killed me, killed me. I am SO MANY SHADES OF DEAD right now.

I honestly think this may be the best piece you've written so far and I'm just beside myself because I ADORE IT but also am kind of wanting to kick it for not giving them their happy ending!!! *pouts*

There are so many freaking brilliant and gorgeous lines in this, I don't even know where to start. But just be forewarned, we may be here for awhile:

Eventually, the high of living another’s life would wear off, the excitement would dim, and the sense of escape would die, leaving him with the blunt fact that he, in fact, had not gone anywhere.

GAH. I can so clearly see this as being exactly how Rob feels after diving head first into a role only to discover that once time has passed and the glow has worn away, he's left feeling a bit empty in the same old life he started out with. Amazing!

Hiding meant layering, ( ... )

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suprockstar February 1 2009, 02:27:13 UTC
Okay do you have ANY idea how happy you've just made me?!?!?! You rock so much, you don't even know. This might just be my favorite piece also, haha I can't pick between this and "All We Are". I'm soooo glad you liked this! Fo seriously. Do you have any idea how much influence you have over my writing? Like if you said you didn't like one of my stories, I would HATE IT forever. So I'm so glad that you've liked every one of my stories. =) It means so much to me. And I feel so honored cuz you're such an AMAZING writer, and you like my attempts at angst. =P

You rock my world. =) Thank you so much again.

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seluciav February 1 2009, 05:05:06 UTC
I assure you, the feeling is entirely mutual BB!!! But on the serious, this piece is just fucking brilliant so you ought to be insane-o proud of yourself. This one's going down in the record books of AWESOME.

And hey, if I rock your world I say it is only fair, 'cause you've been rocking mine even longer. :-)

HUGS!!!

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suprockstar February 2 2009, 02:59:16 UTC
LOL yeah man, we're BOTH just awesome k. haha

so when can I read the next part of your AHMAZING robsten fic?!?! IM DYING.

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sglitzys January 30 2009, 03:18:19 UTC
Thanks for recommending the song, my first time hearing it. Lovely and well written one-shot. The rain scene played out nicely in my head too XD.

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suprockstar February 1 2009, 02:28:35 UTC
Thank you so much! =) I'm so in love with that song, and the first time I heard it was like, k this is going to be have to be a fic. LOL haha I loved writing the rain scene, =) Thank you again!

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heather_mc73 January 30 2009, 03:26:49 UTC
This was written so beautifully... I loved this :

When they met only three weeks ago, it was as if there was an earthquake in each of their lives. But this earthquake did not split, and fracture lives. Instead, it broke each person away from each of their lives, bringing the two of them together.

That description is perfection. Great job.

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bella_violet20 January 30 2009, 03:35:19 UTC
I like that part too!

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suprockstar February 1 2009, 02:30:13 UTC
LOL thank you! =)

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suprockstar February 1 2009, 02:29:37 UTC
Thank you so much! =) I'm so glad you liked it.

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bella_violet20 January 30 2009, 03:34:46 UTC
You. are. AHHHH-MAZING...love it, yet again!
I love this quote:
"Her eyes danced across his jaw line, tracing the prominence of it, imagining how it would feel to just have the slightest feel of his unshaven beard against her lips."
jawline FTW *swoon*

It was happy yet unhappy at the same time. I would love to write more angstiness for them. I just need some inspiration...

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suprockstar February 1 2009, 02:34:05 UTC
Thank you so much!! haha Rpattz's jawline is DEFINITELY ftw. ;)

I don't know what it is, but I can't HELP but write angst. I cannot write fluff, no matter HOW MUCH I try, it turns out to be the most cheesy and cliche thing ever. Angst is just so much fun for me to write, and thats seriously all I write if you've read my other fics. Inspiration usually comes to me at the most random times ever, and when it does I HAVE to write it down, or theres a chance I might forget it. I usually get my angsty inspiration from songs, so maybe that will help you? I'd LOVE to read angst written by you. =)

Thank you so much again for reading! =)

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bella_violet20 February 1 2009, 05:51:17 UTC
This is kind of angsty, I think. Beware, it's also dirty: http://bella-violet20.livejournal.com/5648.html

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suprockstar February 2 2009, 02:54:44 UTC
LOL so, sadly I cannot read it because you have an age restriction on it. And I just so happen to be 16.

And I wanted to read your brilliant angstyness! =[

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