LJ Idol: Playing the Odds

Apr 12, 2011 19:10

I can't believe the fuckers actually caught me.

I know, I was careless. I was supposed to just be scoping out the Depot for the Action next month. But when I saw the Animals trying to rape the little sisters, I guess I just lost it. I mean, just because the little sisters don't have Minds doesn't mean they're not Our sisters, you know ( Read more... )

lj idol, future, fiction

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basric April 13 2011, 00:35:47 UTC
Wonderfully done, you are both right there taking to opposite sides and presenting them perfectly. Well done.

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supremegoddess1 April 13 2011, 00:42:48 UTC
thanks!

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applespicy April 13 2011, 00:45:42 UTC
Aahhhh I love it! I actually did a bit of bouncing, I am not ashamed to say, when I read this. Totally, totally perfect. I love that the Brains are mostly women, and the way they think of the Animals. Love it, love it, love it.

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supremegoddess1 April 13 2011, 00:48:09 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! You did a great job creating a world that I could work well with. I enjoyed writing it. :)

On a side note, wanna be my fweind? :)

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applespicy April 13 2011, 00:52:11 UTC
We must be on a wavelength or something - I was just creepin' on your profile, about to hit that little "add friend" button.

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supremegoddess1 April 13 2011, 00:54:06 UTC
GMTA?

I don't write much any more - being a crazed grad student, LJ was one of the things that ended up giving, but you are welcome to my wacky world. :)

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beeker121 April 14 2011, 01:28:31 UTC
Oooh. The story is still creepy, but knowing a little more about the enemy makes it much cooler. Nicely done.

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supremegoddess1 April 14 2011, 01:40:10 UTC
Thanks!

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comedychick April 14 2011, 03:00:07 UTC
I love reading different perspectives to the same story. It really shows how complex situations can be.

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supremegoddess1 April 14 2011, 03:00:45 UTC
Thank you for reading!

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locknkey April 14 2011, 04:44:13 UTC
Nice voice in this - calm but strong. Also nice alternate POV to your partners. :)

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supremegoddess1 April 14 2011, 04:45:05 UTC
Thank you. :)

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