Comments | supremegoddess1: LJ Idol (2nd Chance division): Softness

supremegoddess1

LJ Idol (2nd Chance division): Softness

Feb 06, 2011 15:24

In the Morning
     (when i wake….
     it is so early,
     you know.)
there is a Dent,
an Impression -
a Reminder
     (of you)
fragmented and fragile.

It is You but Not-You.
A semi-tangible Ghost,
     (you told me you will always haunt me,
     ( Read more... )

lj idol, poetry, relationships

Comments 6

myrna_bird February 7 2011, 17:16:58 UTC

This is pretty but sad, 'gone but not forgotten.' Nice job.

supremegoddess1 February 8 2011, 01:21:40 UTC

Thank you.

imafarmgirl February 9 2011, 01:47:03 UTC

Lovely yet sad. Nice job.

supremegoddess1 February 9 2011, 01:53:20 UTC

Thank you.

ecosopher February 12 2011, 05:53:23 UTC

This reminds me of a song I once learnt called "Touch the Wind" - grasping at the memory of someone but not ever able to really hold onto it any longer.

Lovely entry.

supremegoddess1 February 12 2011, 09:42:33 UTC

Thank you. Not familiar with that song....maybe I will have to check it out!