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[chuchama]

Pseudo-mystic thoughts | Tachycardia is a bitch, Wooyoung thinks passively enough as he lays in the grass and convinces himself that he really is not panicking so his heart slows down to under 150 beats a minute and then down to under 100, instead of accelerating to 270 like it wants. | 403 words | a/n: Actually not completely random, but based on

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[krdzr]

this kinda got me scared.
i had incidents of my heartbeat suddenly going berserk for no reason...
O.O paranoid.

this is nice ^^
glad to read it :)

you could have at least written what tachycardia is :))
i feel stupid for asking myself "who is tachycardia?" upon reading your summary :))

[chuchama]

Iiiii didn't even realize that the summary makes tachycardia seem like a person! I should definitely define it in the author note. The most basic explanation is that it's a heart condition where your heartbeat abnormally speeds up.

Thank you reading it anyway, you could have definitely passed it by with the whole tachycardia thing.

[madelyn93]

this may sound morbid, but i love the name of this condition.

and of course, this was interesting, because i've never heard of tachycardia before this. i like how this is almost neutral in tone, with the right mix of angst and possible romance thrown in.

and the last sentence is just beautiful.

[flyfallcrash]

Oh wow. This was all sorts of wonderful :D
I love how WooYoung stays so calm and Khun just waits for him.
So idk how to explain

[tees2mai]

I love this.

Wooyoung laughs, says, “Stupid, I’m fine.” Because he knows Nickhun will never leave him, not for this, not for something so not Wooyoung’s fault. The luck of the draw, the lottery of genetics, Nickhun insisted he didn’t care and Wooyoung holds him to it. 130.

“Mm. Okay,” Nickhun breathes out, into the fabric of Wooyoung’s jacket - when’d his head get pillowed into Wooyoung’s chest? - “Okay, I believe you.”

Nature is: a slowing heart beat, a light hand on his arm, dying grass wet and stuck between his fingers. Breathe, he tells himself, breathe and contemplate the sky.

Beautiful <3