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[SoL 2010 Fanfic] For sapphire_hime

Mar 27, 2010 02:59

Title: Working Man
Pairings: Alle/Marie
Rating: PG
Prompt: The First Fight

She was lovely. The pregnancy had made her breasts a little fuller, and the gentle swelling of her belly made her so irresistible. He loved running his hands over her bump, feeling the life they had made inside her. His Marie had grown even more beautiful with motherhood ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

sapphire_hime March 27 2010, 03:56:54 UTC

Thank you so much for choosing this prompt, as I was hoping to. I think it worked out perfectly, especially the tension that comes with the first fight. I love how realistically you articulated their relationship. Thank you for writing this!

sapphire_hime March 29 2010, 00:13:07 UTC

Very glad you liked! What a relief! It was actually the hardest out of the three prompts (especially thinking about WHAT they would fight about), but I took one look and knew it had to be written.

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anonymous April 10 2010, 06:31:18 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, your comment warms my heart!

lulumasquerade December 30 2010, 01:31:40 UTC

Very nice. I found it very fitting for their relationship.