Comments | supernatrlmommy: A Hole Lotta Trouble 3/?, PG13, Wee!chesters, Sam, Dean, John

supernatrlmommy

A Hole Lotta Trouble 3/?, PG13, Wee!chesters, Sam, Dean, John

Mar 15, 2008 16:19

A Hole Lotta Trouble - 3/?

The air was damp and freezing around him; shivering, Sam struggled to open his eyes to gain his bearings. His hands splayed half-hazardly before him on the frozen earth. His shirt and jacket were pushed up, leaving his stomach almost stuck to the ground. He attempted to move his arms; levering himself to a sitting ( Read more... )

hole, wee!chesters, h/c, angst

Comments 13

nickitynackity March 16 2008, 00:13:20 UTC

I've been lurking around as an anonymous reader, but decided to take the plunge and open an account. This is a good story, I think I'll have to poke around your account more and read some others!

supernatrlmommy March 16 2008, 04:44:11 UTC

Well, hello there and what a sweet compliment. I originally came out of lurkdom because of reading fanfic too. And then I went on to start writing it *snorts*.

I'd love to see you poke around, and please - let me know what you think! I always like to hear what new readers think of my stuff.

Welcome, and enjoy!

bb1128 March 16 2008, 02:13:56 UTC

An update for this too!? Seriously awesome :D I'm really liking this story so far... poor Sam is in some big trouble, and i had to laugh at Dean's "cursing little brothers who had to pee, Dads who knew it all, and big, fugly, hairy ass monsters" - too funny, and so true, poor kid.. but i'm glad he's gotten away, now all he has to do is find John and then they can make their way to Sam...

Loving this already.. Can't wait to read more!

beth xx

supernatrlmommy March 16 2008, 04:45:57 UTC

This update was hard, because I had a hard time writing a young Sammy hurting *sniff sniff*, but since i got to look forward to a little Dean having a few snarky moments, it made it all worthwhile *smiles*

I'm glad you liked, and really - I'm totally enjoying this one too! Writing it is tons of fun!
Thanks!

faye_dartmouth March 17 2008, 00:14:39 UTC

Ouch!! You certainly haven't held back on hurting poor young Sam! You know the way to a girl's heart :)

The detail here is lovely and I adore Sam's attempts to do what his father would have him do even while growing increasingly irrational.

Here's looking forward to Dean and John finding delusional and in shock :)

supernatrlmommy March 17 2008, 00:34:33 UTC

What can I say, Limp!Sam fan # 1000, or something like that. LOL
One parallel I've had fun exploring is how all three of the Winchesters have to remind themselves to focus in a crisis, John because of worries for the boys, Dean and Sam because of being scared, hurt, worried about everyone else. I figure to a younger Sam, Dad's still a hero.

Well, this isn't gonna be an epic, but there is just a bit more to go. *grins*

Glad you're enjoying it!

eken95 March 17 2008, 22:10:31 UTC

Just thought I'd mention it but did you mean a 'whole' lotta trouble as I didn't find a hole in it?

supernatrlmommy March 18 2008, 00:08:51 UTC

No - actually it is supposed to be a play on words, because Sammy fell down a hole. *grins* But thanks!

pizzapixie April 10 2008, 23:31:45 UTC

Hey! I've been waiting for this, and still somehow missed it. I hope you're going to finish because now I'm doubly worried. Will Dean be o.k.? Sam? Did John abandon poor Sammy? See? I really want to see how this goes. Thanks so much for sharing.

supernatrlmommy April 10 2008, 23:51:16 UTC

Still working on it, promise! Just had some health stuff over the last few weeks, and other RL things to deal with. I've already written some of this update though, so soon!

Thanks!