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Fanfiction: Glee: Like It Or Not It's What We Do

Aug 28, 2010 03:25

Title: Like It Or Not It’s What We Do
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 823
Summary: Rachel’s stood up by Finn and finds herself at Brittany’s party where she ends up talking to Puck.
Author’s note: Written for stainofmylove’s Five Acts Meme. I tried to through a couple of the acts in there. Unbeta’d.

( It's The Love Of Guilt That Forms The Habit Of Being Dramatically Overdramatic )

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Comments 10

stomp_the_floor August 28 2010, 10:40:44 UTC

Beautiful demonstration of Puck / Rachel friendship with the hint of potential for so much more.

superkappa August 28 2010, 10:46:50 UTC

Thank you. :) I'm glad you like it.

stainofmylove August 28 2010, 14:18:13 UTC

Yessssss, fic from you! I like this a lot. Your Rachel is such a great mix of totally practical and intuitive when it comes to others, yet unaware of or in denial of a lot of her own internal workings. I love that Puck as the enigma, and the UST and cup sharing was loooooovely. Thanks for writing this! Weeee! Let there be more fic!

superkappa August 28 2010, 19:07:03 UTC

I had a lot of fun writing this, your acts totally gave me good reason to give their voices a try again. The UST was probably the biggest challenge for me, so I'm glad you liked this. And yes! Let there be more fic!

cailet_06 August 28 2010, 14:57:49 UTC

Great story, and I like how you don't have Puck be the typical white knight (a mistake I have seen a lot of writers do) very in character. I can't wait to see what else you have in store.

superkappa August 28 2010, 19:02:21 UTC

Thank you. That balance was really a trick to play with while writing this.

force_oblique August 29 2010, 13:21:51 UTC

Awws that was cute!
I love their relationship in this!

superkappa August 29 2010, 17:00:53 UTC

Thank you so much!

bellonablack September 1 2010, 08:40:01 UTC

I loved the dynamic in this. They can't help but care about each other, and I'm not sure who is more oblivous. Puck is so protective but still blunt and honest. Rachel is sharp but so distant from her feelings.

I'm loving it, and I felt the disappointment when he didn't offer to drive her back himself. And it made sense, too. Wonderful, and a bit bittersweet mixed with some real sweet.

superkappa September 1 2010, 08:42:32 UTC

I think for Rachel, she has really strong feelings, so when it's real, she tries to distance herself from them to avoid any real risk or loss.

Well, in my mind, he was pretty drunk..ergo, should have not driven her back, so in a weird way, he's being more thoughtful by not trying to. Even if it doesn't seem that way. If that..makes any sense at all.