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Fanfiction: Heroes: All Of This Forgotten, Not By Me

Jul 06, 2009 04:39

Title: All Of This Forgotten, Not By Me
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Noah Bennet centric (with mentions of Elle, Bob, and Claire)
Summary: Later that night, on his drive home, no matter how loud he turned the radio up, all he could hear were those small girl’s screams.Warnings: References to experimenting on children ( Read more... )

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Comments 21

shamusandstone July 6 2009, 17:23:45 UTC

Yup. This pretty much nails it. Yikes.

superkappa July 6 2009, 17:30:23 UTC

I'm glad to hear that. I find his voice to be one of the harder ones to grasp, so I'm glad I did it justice.

dragynflies July 6 2009, 19:33:59 UTC

Aw, Elle. This was very well done, one of my favorites. It tied in wonderfully with bennet's relationship with Claire and made me sad for Elle, just Like it was supposed to. Wonderful job!

superkappa July 6 2009, 19:37:41 UTC

Thank you. Poor Elle. Her childhood is just...so sad :(

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superkappa July 9 2009, 22:59:41 UTC

I'm really curious too. I hope they give us more backstory on the founders someday. They're really interesting to me.

di_elle July 11 2009, 16:06:33 UTC

;_;

my baby elle... ;_;

great work with this little fic. really great!

superkappa July 11 2009, 16:15:18 UTC

Elle's childhood makes me sad inside ;;

Thank you!

hamimifk July 11 2009, 16:32:06 UTC

*lip trembles* ): Poor lil Elle. It breaks my heart when I think of how cruel Bob was to her. *huggles* Elle*

Wonderful piece, btw.

superkappa July 11 2009, 16:37:55 UTC

It breaks my heart too. She really did have a rough childhood.

Thank you.