Comments | superjill: Crowdsourcing my songwriting

superjill

Crowdsourcing my songwriting

Jan 15, 2011 11:49

I need help with one of my lines!

Ukulele RebelIf I were a smarter woman ( Read more... )

songwriting, ukulele comedienne, ukulele madness

Comments 4

ext_393182 January 16 2011, 01:40:21 UTC

I'm still doing better than you
I'm doing better than I used to
I bet you wish you were doing it too

..none of which says what you wanted it to say, but I think still makes sense in context?

You ukulele rebel, you.

superjill January 16 2011, 01:43:34 UTC

Thanks Clara Anne!

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superjill January 16 2011, 22:04:27 UTC

Thanks Deirdre! The sniffing glue one made me LOL.
I've put my current short-list on a note in FB, if you wanna check that and vote.

the_emi January 17 2011, 08:44:27 UTC

Why should I seem reprehensible to you?

;)