haikus

Aug 29, 2006 02:31

I'm learning to live
in the moment and I've liked
the moments with you

9 weddings this year.
3 normal. Today we choose
family that fits.

Wooing me----IMPORTANT.
How you treat me when you're
not, is even more.

poems, haiku

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pers August 29 2006, 06:42:23 UTC
Ooooh, I like the first one a lot!

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superjill August 29 2006, 15:57:39 UTC
thank you! <3

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superjill August 29 2006, 15:56:25 UTC
YOU'RE wacky! lolol

i like these, but probably mostly cuz i'm getting to understand your brain. :P

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mglizak August 29 2006, 14:30:22 UTC
Whenever you're there
I have to fight to focus
On the task at hand

Weddings are great--BUT
Only when they're redundant.
Else they're just a show.

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superjill August 29 2006, 15:55:05 UTC
<3 <3 <3

and the second--i agree. interesting angle. very well put.

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arteris August 29 2006, 15:42:30 UTC
Do not lie to me
That you will stay forever
Bound only through vow

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superjill August 29 2006, 15:53:03 UTC
heh. love this.

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pixiechick_sw August 30 2006, 02:54:12 UTC
Yeah!

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