Workshop: Writing Dinah Lance (Black Canary) by Merfilly

Jun 11, 2007 21:35

Thank you again, jen_in_japan for hosting this community for us.

So people seem to think I write a halfway decent Black Canary.

Still not sure how that came about. I lack so much of her canon, and so much of what I do recall is hazy and loaded down in a child's memories.

What did I get myself into? )

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darkdanc3r June 13 2007, 20:58:09 UTC
Nicely written. You managed to fit a lot of information into a relatively short essay. I love that you at least tried to manage a logical timeline for the pretty bird - something DC hasn't really thought about.

*hug*

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darkdanc3r June 13 2007, 22:04:38 UTC
Well... for the amount of space it too up, it was kind of short. you had a bunch of one and two liners. I wasn't trying to say that you should've done more! I was just saying that for me to give that much info, I probably would've meandered through twice that much space

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darkdanc3r June 13 2007, 21:32:56 UTC
Nicely written. You managed to fit a lot of information into a relatively short essay. I love that you at least tried to manage a logical timeline for the pretty bird - something DC hasn't really thought about.

*hug*

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