Savior (Chapter 6)

[superhappynao]

                “Are you ok?” Came a voice from inside the house. Naoyuki slowly shut the wooden door and looked around into the small room. The fire was blazing at the very back, crackling happily as it boiled a pan of rice and water. The intense glow of the fire gave the house a warm temperature that welcomed Nao like a soft and loving hug, but

Comments

[karol_uchiha]

how can I breathe reading it?!?!?! OH MY GOD! My heart is racing @_@~~
I NEED MORE! NOW! GO WRITE! Ò_Ó

ok stopped u.u~~

Well! I loved it! *-* And I'm starting to think Hiroto is Nao's son ._.~~ Maybe I'm just thinking too much XD

Well! Kayo is cute I loved her! *-* And I'm afraid of Tora finding Shou! ç-ç~~ Poor Shou! He has terrible problems with his "angel rules" it's cruel! @_@"~~ But well drama is good lD~~ it makes me happy (I'm a sadistic girl XD)
And finally Hiroto did something about Shou's trouble with his feelings ._. did I make any sense to you? XD I hope so

Well! You're meaaaaaaan! You made me all curious now! x.x"~~
I can't stop thinking about this fic... And Shou as an Angel ... It's just too perfect! *-*
Well LOVED and I want MORE!~~
Soon! please XD

[karol_uchiha]

I read it again... I can't help it! u.ú"
Just come to say HURRY UP! XD

[superhappynao]

Hi! *bows to apologise for my late post*
I'm totally useless with comments and I've been all over the place recently!

Wow! I'm so glad you like it so much! Although breathing is important!!! I'll make sure I bring inhalors and gas&air next time I write XD

teeeheee more will be revealed soon! (or not soon... looking at the pace I'm writing at >.<) but XDDD his rules should be called 'anger rules' from now on, he seriously needs to chill! (but yes there would be no drama without him, and I'm kinda sadistic too so all is good! sorta!)

Ah yes that did make sense XD And I know I'm being even more mean by not updating! I swear I will be updating soon! thank you so much for reading and commenting!

[vampiremilly]

OMG!! noo!! if Tora comes to get Shou, i will pop into the computer and take Tora DOWN!!!
ok, let that out, but, what's going to happen? i must know! please update quickly!! >3

[superhappynao]

Ahahhaa well if you take him down feel free to do what you like to him! I'm taking on Nao! XD
Aaaaa I'm sorry I didn't even comment quickly let alone update! I should be updating soon though, I'm very sorry for the wait but I'm very glad you've enjoyed it so far and thank you for commenting! :D

[beyondtheremix]

Stupid Tora >:( How are you ever going to save someone if you keep killing their guardian angel?!! IT's nice to learn of Nao's past O_O... did... Tora kill her?!?! *gasp* I can't wait to find out more, I'm glad you've started to feel like writing!!! Keep at it!!!!

<3

[superhappynao]

Hahahaha 1+1 really doesn't make 2 for Tora... poor guy...
LOL as soon as I mentioned that i was back into writing I DIDN'T WRITE! *hangs head in shame* but I swear I'll be getting back on track soon... I've had interesting times XD
thanks for reading and commenting again!!! I love it when I see you've read and it must be difficult to keep up with me when it takes me so long to update >.

[beyondtheremix]

XD all the more reason to reread every chapter ROFL *am lame* my commenting is pretty lame too O_O ahaha I don't know WHAT time of the night I was typing that, but LOOOOOOOOL what a retarded comment XD I hope you find inspiration for anything(??) something soon! LOL<3

[pon_baby]

OMFG! ~
the history's fantastic! i.i <333
I need more! T3T

oh god.. I almost died when Shou and Hiroto kissed. ;3;'

Well.. Your history's perfect. u_u#

pleaaaaase, update soon! ~ ;-; <3

[superhappynao]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked that part because I was worried about it!
I'm sorry I've been so late with everything but I've been a little preoccupied recently. I will definitely update soon though! Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

[intrusivity]

finally... FINALLY the epic kiss scene. i was waiting for this for soo damn long. but as usual u twisted it around and made it somewhat heartbreaking. ♥ i love it. xP

[superhappynao]

It did take a very long time to happen! But yes... I twisted it... I end up being kinda evil with these guys XD
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, I'm sorry I've been so late with everything but I swear I will hurry up! :D