Paintings Of Their World

Jan 10, 2013 20:46


Title: Paintings Of Their World
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Sungmin
Rating: R
Genre: Angst, Romance, Friendship, Slice Of Life
Summary When world class pianist, Lee Sungmin finally meets his match; the quirky tooth doctor, Cho Kyuhyun, he realizes that yes, maybe he does deserve to be happy.
[READ MORE]Narrator's POVIt was like a fresh painting - the virgin brushings Read more... )

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slutkyu January 10 2013, 13:00:56 UTC
WIFEY ♥

I finally found a place to comment on your fic. I should wait for you to post on LJ next time, so I don't have to search for a place to comment since I don't have an AFF account (I'm not cool). This comment was typed directly after I read the fic which you gave me the link to AFF, so you can ignore some of the things I've said because I'm too lazy to rewrite my comment (but you still love me for being lazy anyway).

I'm actually quite confused about the painting. Why are your fics getting so deep? My stupid brain can't handle it.
(You already answered this part for me)

Aww, you like making Kyuhyun the nice guy now? Not that I'm complaining.

So at the 2nd part of the fic when they were at the cafe, did they already get together? I don't understand, I'm getting dumb (the effect of not going to school for more than a year now).
(You already answered this too)

"You're dating your dentist?"Oh. Nice one, Sungjin ( ... )

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aqilahfilzah January 10 2013, 13:10:18 UTC
LMFAO HUBBY I WAS STRUGGLING WITH THIS FOR HOURS. LJ HATES ME OKAY I HAD TO CHANGE FROM MY NOTEBOOK TO MY COMPUTER AND THEN I WENT FOR THE LAST RESORT WHICH IS MY FATHER'S LAPTOP.

SAHDKLAHSDKHASKHD I HATE YOU LJ PLS THANKS.

And lol yes yes yes, I love you n___n

I DON'T KNOW OMG WHEN DID I GET SO DEEP. (not deep like in you kind of deep okay)

I WON'T FORGET AND MY KISS WILL NOT BE GIVEN UNTIL....I WANT IT TO BE GIVEN.

and btw i told you i can't read this more than thrice right? i know i made a few mistakes with double words and all "with as ----" i can't find it!! there's a spelling mistake also where omg where

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slutkyu January 10 2013, 13:20:35 UTC
(not deep like in you kind of deep okay)
What does that mean?

WAE U NO GIVE MY KISS

It's okay, I automatically correct the grammatical errors in my head while I read at the same time.

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aqilahfilzah January 10 2013, 13:33:13 UTC
in you means when someone thrust in you? n_n

BUT I STILL NEED TO CHANGE THEM WHY AM I SO LAZY

WHY ARE WE THE LAZY COUPLE

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yuue04 January 10 2013, 20:12:05 UTC
I SWEAR YOUR SUNGMIN AND MY KYUHYUN IS CHANGING FROM WHAT YOU USUALLY WROTE
SUNGMIN IS....IDK HOW TO DESCRIBE IT [YET] BUT KYUHYUN IS A LOT NICER AND HE NOW HAVE THAT RELIABLE GENE IN HIS CHARACTER
I HOPE IT WAS A GOOD SIGN FOR YOU, BECAUSE IT WAS A GOOD SIGN FOR ME LOL IDK ANYORE TT.TT

MAYBE BECAUSE I READ YOUR EXPLANATION FIRST BEFORE READING I FOUND IT WAS EASY TO UNDERSTAND
AND I WAS ACTUALLY AFRAID OF SUNGJIN BECOMING THE BAD GUY BUT AWWWWWW HE IS SUCH A SWEETHEART TT.TT

“What are you doing here?”

He could feel it coming; the insecurities, the thought that he wasn’t good enough and Kyuhyun doesn’t want him.

YEAH, MY FAVOURITEST FAVOURITE PART TT.TT
NOW LET ME CRY
<33333333

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poppyonmars January 11 2013, 03:21:45 UTC
so beautiful, slightly confusing at first, but still beautiful ~

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torriee January 11 2013, 09:39:52 UTC
I loveeee ittttt

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jacquejacque January 17 2013, 15:03:11 UTC
This is all kinds of wonderful. Hands down beautiful.

Loved every line; loved every bit. Looking forward to reading your other works. <3

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