The Right One [Daddy, Don’t Cry] -Chapter One: He's Here

[aqilahfilzah]

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[blue_gamer]

I'm not the type to comment in fanfics but MAAAAAAAN THIS JUST SCREAMS AWESOME ;W; Really excited for the next chapter! \O/

[aqilahfilzah]

HELLO CHO KYU.

CAN I SCREAM AT YOU THOUGH? /lame

[blue_gamer]

OH HALLO THER LOL SCREAM AS MUCH AS YOU WANT LOLLL xD

[yuue04]

I WAS TAPPING MY FEET WAITING FOR DONGHAE TO SHOW UP SERIOUSLY KEKEKE
AND YES, I KNOW YOU ENOUGH TO SEE YOUR EFFLUX OF BIASNESS OTL
OKAY, I KNOW THIS WOULD BE THE DAY OF BIRTH OF EVIL MIGHTY CHO KYU BUT THEN WHY SUNGMIN IS WRITHING IN PAIN???
BECAUSE HE IS HIS OTHER HALF AND MING IS NOT SUPPOSED TO HAVE OTHER HALF??? [TILTS HEAD] I REALLY CAN COUNT ON YOU FOR PUZZLING ME
I LOVE SOUR CANDY, MING GIVE ME SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME!!!!

[aqilahfilzah]

HE WILL. I THINK. MEHHHHH. LOOK AT ALL MY GAY LOVE IN THIS FIC. I HAVE FROM SUJU GAYNESS TO KAT-TUN'S GAYNESS OMG I SHOULD INCLUDE ARASHI.

WRITHING IN PAIN JUST LIKE WHEN KYU THRUST INTO HIM

I WON'T TELL YOU, PRINCESS. YOU ACT LIKE YOU'RE CLUELESS BUT I THINK YOU'RE THE ONLY ONE THAT HAS CAUGHT ON THE MOST SO FAR. /NOT TELLING MORE

NOOOOOO SUNGMIN DISLIKES YOU. /PUSHES

[kelyh]

Owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I like that!!!! looks very veeeeeeeeery interesting!!!
Update soon! <3

[aqilahfilzah]

Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy for our unicorns and leprechauns love for KyuMin madness. I don't even think I make sense but thank you for reading!!!!!!!

must be donghae's fault for all the !!

[abluelife]

OMG THIS IS SOOOOO COOLLLLLL

IT'S ONLY THE FIRST CHAPTER AND IT GOT ME ALL WORKED UP! ><

I LOVE SOUR CANDIES TOO! But it's pretty weird why Min loves giving out sour candies... /ponders/

and the painful entrance... Dear kyuhyunnie and Minnie ><...

[paperhunter]

This is good!!!

Waiting for the next one!!^^