Fanfiction: I See Red - 22

[supercontenta]

Title: I See Red
Rating: R
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - I am wayyyyy behind on my fic reading. So if any of you authors out there have been thinking, "why hasn't supercontenta commented on my fic yet? Does she hate me?!" The answer is no. I don't hate you. I love you! I've just been busy writing this little chapter. So, rest

Comments

[lovelyafterglow]

Bravo! *throw flowers* *throws confetti* *throws panties*

That was a beautiful chapter, supes. Tragic, and heart-wrenching, and just breathtaking.

Oooh, I can't wait for the next chapter. My heart is about ready to burst!

See, now why can't people understand that THIS is what I want for the show...not Pepa succumbing to the need for vengeance and not Pepa getting over Silvia with someone else. Bah! I know the story's not done yet, but THIS is the kind of story Pepa and Silvia deserve. Whatever happens on the show, supes, I think I'd rather believe in the world you've created here.

[supercontenta]

*Catches a flower and puts it in hair*

Lovely, that comment was absolutely, well... LOVELY!! And this flower makes me look pretty. Thanks :)

But seriously - WOW!! I couldn't have asked for a better response to my fic. I wish my story could magically come to life on the small screen, but I'll just have to stick with imagining it in my mind and sharing it with all of you.

Thanks for making my day with your extremely flattering words. They honestly touched my heart. You're the best, lovely...

*Catches panties, pulls them on head and runs off into the night*

[lenageek]

Aaaahhhhhh!!! Supes!!! How sad, how tragic, how beautiful!! That last line! [Thuds over] I'm reading this at work and totally trying not to cry at my desk - whew!

Wow, hot damn, you are one talented writer! The way you express Pepa's agony, her delimma with El Gordo (tho it was incredibly satisfying for her to make the El Fucko squeal) and then being reunited with her pelirroja at last! Sob! I'm only sad for those whom Pepa and Silvia leave behind but it's a gorgeous ending that they find themselves together, as they always should be.

[supercontenta]

Lenageek, thanks soooo much honey!! You're too kind! I hope I didn't make you too sad with this chapter, because I have to tell you, the story isn't over yet. There is more to read!!! Well, that is, once I write it. One small detail.

And you know I just HAD to give Pepa the satisfaction of SOME revenge. Having El Gordo by the short hairs for a few moments was pretty sweet. And in the end, he got what he deserved.

Anyway, dry your eyes, there is more to come. For example, that happy ending I promised...

[vickiheartpepsi]

Wow.
hold on,let me process....WOW.

that was so awesome!!! xD evn tho i teared but it was really really REALLY well written!
i love it! :D

[supercontenta]

Thank you vicki! More to come!

[elisa_trapt]

I, uh....wow...I don't know what to say

[supercontenta]

elisa, honey, I don't have time to properly respond right now, but I just have to quickly say: The story isn't over yet!!

Nope. Not over yet. You'll just have to wait and see what happens next...

Have faith, my friend, have faith...

[elisa_trapt]

Oh, I know it's not THE end, I'm not so addled that I don't remember promises of a happy ending! It's just that I don't know now if that happy ending is on this mortal Earth or on a fluffy white cloud w/ heavenly hosts singing "Alleluia" in the background!

Unless you're messing w/ us again. But you wouldn't do that, would you, super? *narrows eyes suspiciously* Would you?

Okay, have faith, have faith. Got it. And now I've also got George Michael singing in my head...."You gotta have faith, faith, faith...."

[supercontenta]

Ok, here is my FULL response to your comments

[sumatrabean]

That's exactly how I wish the real show would have ended. Pepa avenging Silvia and then together forever.

Thank You.

[supercontenta]

Your welcome, sumatrabean. Thank YOU for reading. And who knows, maybe it COULD happen on the show, but I have little faith in that. So I'll just keep writing my story - which isn't over btw. I must stress this - the story is not over! More soon, I promise.