Fanfiction: I See Red - 21

[supercontenta]

Title: I See Red
Rating: R
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - Thanks for your patience. Just got back from a trip, otherwise I would've posted sooner. As always, comments are welcome.

Silvia...?

Pepa get down!

I drop to my knees behind the deteriorating courtyard wall before anyone can notice my presence, my redhead thankfully taking

Comments

[vickiheartpepsi]

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!

but..but!!!!!.....i love this chapter,i do but..but!!..*sighs defeated*

well i really REALLY love the angst it's just..WHERE'S SILVIA?!!!!

[supercontenta]

I'm glad you loved the chapter liked the angst, and I know it's painful, but just hang in there, vicki.

[trickydaos]

*speechless*
Oh my....what's just going on?! What...how...
Silvia...

I'll always be with you, Pepa. Forever...

*bawling*
Noooo...!!!! What will happen after this? This will have happy ending, right? Please!

Superb writing, I can really feel Pepa's anguish. Especially because your description makes me remember ep.104 in all its details...*crying in the corner*

[supercontenta]

*rubs Tricky's back*

I'm sorry this is bringing back memories of the finale. I didn't mean to do that, exactly, but I had to bring the drama. Forgive me?

Like I told vicki, just hang in there.

[pepsilove64]

WOW, What happened to SILVIA? You promised a happy ending right? Great Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one, maybe we don't have to wait too long for it Please Please. Thanks for the update Supercontenta

[supercontenta]

Yes, promises were made, and promises will be kept. I'll try and write the next chapter soon, but you know how RL gets in the way sometimes. But I'll try. Thanks so much for commenting and continuing to read.

[junebuggy01]

*Sighs happily* I was starting to twitch in anticipation of this fic... Like, seriously, I was spasming on the floor.

Anywho, great chappy here Supey! Uhhh... somehow that doesn't sound like a good nickname.It sounds watery... I'll go back to Supes. Great chappy here Supes! I love how you had Silvia basically talk Pepa down from her ledge. Comforting Pepa when her revenge corrupted her thoughts. Pepa may be Silvia's base/connection to the land of the living, but it's Silvia who keeps Pepa grounded. If that makes any sense at all... awesome! xD

As always, you know I love your fic and will desperately wait for the next chapter.

[supercontenta]

Dear lord, juney, do you need medication for those spasms? Or is it only "i see red" induced? Well, I'm glad this new chapter relieved your seizure and made you happy.

I'm glad you liked Silvia talking Pepa down. I had to go there with her because under the circumstances who wouldn't think a little "tit for tat", you know? But that's not her way.

Thanks for the awesome comment, juney. I'll try and keep your seizures at bay as best I can.

And yeah, stick with Supes ;P

[silviaslabcoat]

Super Dupa honey your writing as always was beautiful. A very well written chappy Super I felt every emotion Pepa was feeling.

Oh and thank you for the hit!! But Super hun what the hell happened to Silvia and when will she be back???

The only reason I'm not going out of my mind right now is because you told me there will be a happy ending and I trust you too stick to your Super Dupa words!! (please tell me I have nothing to worry about right)????

And lucky girl been on a trip aye hope you enjoyed your trip as much as I enjoyed my recent trip *winks*

Please Super Dupa honey don't leave us hanging on this cliffie for to long ok!! You are going to kill me if you leave me hanging with out knowing if Silvia is ok!!

[supercontenta]

I'm happy you felt Pepa's emotions, as dark or as utterly heartbreaking as they were. I had to go there myself to write it, and it wasn't a happy place :0.

As for Silvia... well, you'll just have to keep reading won't you?

Seriously though. Don't worry, SLC. Your trust in me is well founded. I'll stick to my words. Don't worry your pretty little head.

And as far as trips go, I KNOW my trip wasn't nearly as enjoyable or exciting as yours. That's all I have to say. ;)

[silviaslabcoat]

LOL Super Dupa sweetie my pretty little head is not worried cause I have a lot of faith in ya!! And of course I will keep reading you had me hooked for the first chappy :D

Pepa's emotion were heartbreaking in the chappy I don't know how you can write such emotion. I know you would have to feel them to write them, so how do you come back from that?? I hope you have someone or something to cheer you up after that!!

Well Super Dupa sweetie I hope you have someone to take you on an exciting trip too!!! You deserve one for being so awesome ;P.....Thats all I have to say ;)