Fanfiction: I See Red - 16

Oct 06, 2009 19:12

Title: I See Red
Rating: R - violence/language
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - I'm on my lunch break so I FINALLY have a chance to post this new chapter! Hooray!!! Get ready for Pepa to go medieval on some asses. Hells ya! This chapter is dedicated to dossemanas . Thanks for all your help! And, as usual, comments are welcome and truly ( Read more... )

pepsi fanfic: i see red

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av8rwinn October 7 2009, 03:31:10 UTC
O wow! Absorbing this great story.

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supercontenta October 7 2009, 21:36:22 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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dossemanas October 7 2009, 03:57:43 UTC
the kick-assery of this chapter boggles the mind! i was on the edge of my seat... the tension as pepa hid behind the door... the AWESOMENESS when silvia merged with the bad guy (so creative!!)... i laughed out loud when he thought pepa was reading his mind. what a great way to scare the crap out of the fucker!

and THEN my favorite little sexy ghost popping back and forth between the rooms, helping pepa all the way. yes! and lining her up for the kill shot! ahhh! this whole thing was so imaginative and intense. they are the best team evarrrr. oh how i wish we could have seen something this awesome on the actual show. supes, you are the master!

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supercontenta October 7 2009, 07:28:48 UTC
Awww, dosse. You really know how to sweet talk a girl...

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zivaontour October 7 2009, 04:13:33 UTC
Yay! Pepa and Silvia saved the day! Now to kill El Gordo himself, the asshole.

But wait... where's the smutty sex?! Don't forget the sex!

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supercontenta October 7 2009, 21:36:43 UTC
I won't forget.

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zivaontour October 7 2009, 22:07:09 UTC
Excellent.

You're the best.

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qosmio18 October 7 2009, 04:37:38 UTC
Wow Super. Kiss a$$ chapter. Yeah I agree what a great duo. Pepa all bada$$ shooting the bad guys through the wall. I bet the hostage were like dddaaaaammmmnnn!

Break out specialized theme song. Who's the cat that won't cop out when there's danger all about(Pepa!)Right on You see this cat Pepa is a bad mother--(Shut your mouth)But I'm talkin' about Pep (Then we can dig it)she's a complicated girl but no one understands her but her woman (Silvia)

With all that adrenaline pumping Pepa, maybe some smut. (Shrugging while boths hands in the air). Can't wait for next chapter.

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supercontenta October 7 2009, 15:39:21 UTC
Wow, that song made me want to get down with my bad self. Or buy some drugs. One or the other.

Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked it. Perhaps some smut in your near future ;).

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supercontenta October 7 2009, 15:41:15 UTC
I'm so honored that this chapter upped my pantie status to lingerie!!

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