Fanfiction: I See Red - 15

Sep 30, 2009 14:30

Title: I See Red
Rating: R - adult themes/language
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Spoilers: Post season finale

A/N - So it's been a while. Far too long. My muse was being a selfish bitch. She ran off with some of the Fates, and had themselves an impulsive road trip without telling me where she went! I'm so disappointed in her. Then when she came back she was ( Read more... )

pepsi fanfic: i see red

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lenageek September 30 2009, 22:35:32 UTC
Aaaahhhh! (Sorry, I seem to be deafening all you poor fanfic authors with my screams of frustration!) Can't wait to see what happens next! Will Pepa go in alone? Well, not alone but the only alive cop in this equation. Anyway...loved how she can't keep her mind off smut even in the middle of the job! And your CSI stuff was fantastic and sure sounded realistic to me! What do they always say in those CSI shows? The world is our lab.

Fantastic! I still squeal in delight every time see an update from you!

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supercontenta October 1 2009, 08:44:07 UTC
*uncovers ears* Ok, now that you're done yelling I'll say a big ole thanks for commenting! And double thanks for giving me that icon of yours. Yowza!!! I am staring at it right now and it does things to me that no two-dimensional image should.

I tend to scream in frustration on other fics too. You're not alone. Is the cliffy-ness of this chapter, perhaps? I don't usually do cliffhangers, but this just fit.

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musicbuttons September 30 2009, 22:47:57 UTC
I can't get enough of these two working together on a real case. There was not enough of that in my opinion on the show.
I continue to enjoy this story!
THANK YOU....can't wait for the next chapter!

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supercontenta October 1 2009, 08:45:31 UTC
Hello musicbuttons! I completely agree. I was thinking the other day that we actually didn't get to see them work together much. Kind of a bummer. I imagine they could have done a great episode where it's just the two of them solving a case. You KNOW that arguing would've ensued, not to mention chemistry!!!

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qosmio18 September 30 2009, 23:33:50 UTC
I know Silvia wears the pants in the relationship but damn when Pepa takes charge, it sends shivers down every inch of my body. G'damn she's fine. Ok once again mind went to a naughty place. Hehehe

Ok let's see how this special elite agent hottie shows these bad guys who's boss. >:/ of course with the other hottie's help.

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supercontenta October 1 2009, 08:46:36 UTC
You've got that right. Silvia wears the pants, imo. Pepa would bend over backwards for her. But strong Pepa is kick ass and super hot. Get ready for some ass whoopin'!!

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pepsiaddict37 September 30 2009, 23:57:46 UTC
Awesome, as usual. I to love that they are working together on this. this story continues to be very interesting,and i'm glad you came back with another chapter. i'm waiting patiently for the next one...love it!

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supercontenta October 1 2009, 08:47:05 UTC
Thanks pepsiaddict! And thanks for keeping on me about writing. I like knowing you care :)

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pepsiaddict37 October 1 2009, 15:26:11 UTC
Your welcome...and yes i do care.
I think its important to keep pepsi alive to us.
I for one am still having a hard time accepting all this, so this is good therapy.

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elisa_trapt October 1 2009, 00:57:26 UTC
Phew, got in here before my competition...Super, the fight for Ghost Silvia is getting fierce! Did you know dosse is now perhaps wielding a KNIFE behind her back? I'm sleeping w/ one eye open these days ( ... )

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supercontenta October 1 2009, 08:53:41 UTC
Dosse has no scruples. She'll do anything for her woman. Including, apparently, wielding sharp objects. Not very sporting of her. And I have to say, ghost Silvia probably wouldn't approve. So I don't think she's winning her favor by playing dirty.

I've got my muse locked in the cage with me at the moment. She's not going anywhere soon. I've got the blender going, pumping out margaritas by the dozen!

Now, I may be mistaken, but I think you said you're falling in love with ME? Oh, wait, I'm sorry, that was GHOST SILVIA you were talking about. My bad. I couldn't hear you clearly through your coughs. Yes, she is very appealing in many ways. She can walk through walls, listen to your thoughts, and help you cheat at cards - if you're nice. She's got it all, not to mention she's the most beautiful woman on earth...

I'm glad you liked my chapter. I loved your comment! It made all that work worth while!!

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